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It was 60 long hours that battered my heart,
That is something I never wish to do again,
I barely withstood all the loneliness & pain.

We never spend much time away,
We are together as always day after day,
As the bond we share is so very deep,
It is one that I truly wish to keep.

The nights were the hardest by far,
From this day on I’ll harbour a deep scar,
In my soul I will carry this forever,
The memory & I will stay together.

The memory of the day I nearly lost,
The love of my life at a deadly cost,
There is one promise I will make for you,
It is that I’ll never again turn you blue.

I miss you only after a few minutes have gone by,
My heart & my soul let out a great sigh,
As like me they are so happy that our love,
Has again come together like hand to glove.

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60

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I counted how long we were apart,
It was 60 long hours that battered my heart,
That is something I never wish to do again,
I barely withstood all the loneliness & pain.

We never spend much time away,
We are together as always day after day,
As the bond we share is so very deep,
It is one that I truly wish to keep.

The nights were the hardest by far,
From this day on I’ll harbour a deep scar,
In my soul I will carry this forever,
The memory & I will stay together.

The memory of the day I nearly lost,
The love of my life at a deadly cost,
There is one promise I will make for you,
It is that I’ll never again turn you blue.

I miss you only after a few minutes have gone by,
My heart & my soul let out a great sigh,
As like me they are so happy that our love,
Has again come together like hand to glove.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-21 14:03:05]
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Re: 60 (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:07:22 PM AEST
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Another thing of beauty Pixie ... you are gonna show these to him ... Right ? You should.

Nazzy ~

Re: 60 (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 08:13:12 PM AEST
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a verry effective poem nice writting pixie u tell

it well nice style u have . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: 60 (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:25:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful..its well wrapped. :-)venkat

Re: 60 (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 09:08:19 AM AEST
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Im so glad everything worked out hunni.

As always you just have proven yourself on how good you really are on writing poems.

Can’t wait to read more of them.

Jane ^_^
(Who’s very happy for Kriss & Mark)

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