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I cut into my soul
Compensating the pain
Notch for notch
Problem for problem

Don't you see you're the one
That's really killing me
All this pain that you bring upon me
Its not helping
Its not going to save me

Its too late
You've hurt me too bad
And all that's really left of me
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My Bleeding Wrists

Contributed by cocacola1331 on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

With each problem you bring upon me
I cut into my soul
Compensating the pain
Notch for notch
Problem for problem

Don't you see you're the one
That's really killing me
All this pain that you bring upon me
Its not helping
Its not going to save me

Its too late
You've hurt me too bad
And all that's really left of me
Are my bleeding wrists

Copyright © cocacola1331 ... [ 2005-02-21 13:10:29]
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Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:40:39 PM AEST
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Please dont cut your self... it is not a healthy way t live... I have learned from expeirence... Great write..
GOD BLESS.
*BEBE

Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by DamentedSuicide on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 01:57:40 PM AEST
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Scars can always tell a story...wonderful poem

~~~Raven~~~

Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:04:31 PM AEST
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Great write. Suicide isn't the answer though.

Scott

Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel. And I know how horrible it is.
Good work hun,

~Waos/Kara

Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by rubytears on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:02:02 PM AEST
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i know how that goes cut for cut taking it away yeah i know exactly what it means.....
~*jessica*~
when tears stop coming.......

Re: My Bleeding Wrists (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 5th March 2005 @ 08:21:23 PM AEST
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Good poem I can relate to this all to well, but I
must say blaming people because YOU cut
yourself isn't cool. People may have hurt you
but in the end it was you that cut yourself and
not them. You need to forgive those people
and love yourself. Cutting isn't the answer to
your problems, but writing is so I am glad that
you chose to write out your feelings. Please
continue to use that outlet.

Bobo (Joel)

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