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Array ( [sid] => 85154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Vision [time] => 2005-02-21 12:15:22 [hometext] => This is an experiment with a very different style for me, so i'm not sure how it turned out. [bodytext] => Skyward there appears to be
Downy clouds,
Pictures to see
Oh, look
Angels flying and roaming about
Wow, Jesus is out
Playing with the children
Smiles
Laughter
And fun
No sadness or pain for anyone
Gold paths
And gilded steeples
A dazzling display to please the senses
Fragrance exquisite,
Music so awesome,
Grandeur abounds

Dark clouds are beginning to form again
What a different environment we are in
Back to reality
Forget the fantasy
A feeling of longing takes over

Wait!
What do you see?
An opening with a shaft of brilliant sunlight
A person, Jesus is gesturing to us
A booming voice speaks
"What I have here in heaven is for everyone
All you need to do is acknowledge my Son
And your place in paradise is won"
We smile
My Lord and Saviour [comments] => 6 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 40 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )

A Vision

Contributed by Willofree on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:15:22 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Skyward there appears to be
Downy clouds,
Pictures to see
Oh, look
Angels flying and roaming about
Wow, Jesus is out
Playing with the children
Smiles
Laughter
And fun
No sadness or pain for anyone
Gold paths
And gilded steeples
A dazzling display to please the senses
Fragrance exquisite,
Music so awesome,
Grandeur abounds

Dark clouds are beginning to form again
What a different environment we are in
Back to reality
Forget the fantasy
A feeling of longing takes over

Wait!
What do you see?
An opening with a shaft of brilliant sunlight
A person, Jesus is gesturing to us
A booming voice speaks
"What I have here in heaven is for everyone
All you need to do is acknowledge my Son
And your place in paradise is won"
We smile
My Lord and Saviour

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2005-02-21 12:15:22]
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Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:20:29 PM AEST
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a nice and gentle read, good poem
pix xx

Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:22:50 PM AEST
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A definate step away from the norm Terry. It is always refreshing to see that happen. I recommend you try to do so as offten as possible. I do believe it success. And a beautiful message as well.

Nicely done Terry,

Nazzy ~

Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Moonglow on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:25:35 PM AEST
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Ten outa ten, nice read.

Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Baig on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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thought it was clean and simple. nice

Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:06:34 AM AEST
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Nice vision, good work.
huggs,
emy

Re: A Vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:21:57 PM AEST
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Nice to have visions. Good write. I like it.

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