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Array ( [sid] => 85096 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Climacteric [time] => 2005-02-20 20:48:48 [hometext] => ~my first poem. this is for everyone who has suffered to watch me tie and untie the noose in which i have hung myself with and proceeded to be revived from its inevitable ramifications. ~ [bodytext] => Sorrow befalls me
that i should awaken
in a blood hazed mist
openly surrendering to death
as a betrayal of myself

to live unwanted
to feel no shame
wander around
in endless pain

what shall overcome
and take hold
to tear up inside my soul
what little piece hope and serenity
i behold

destiny's too far away
it shall fall upon this day
and take forever my innocense
away
for i cannot bear to stay
in a world where i am chased
and ever running away
from this endless pain [comments] => 4 [counter] => 351 [topic] => 55 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Climacteric

Contributed by weepingprophet on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:48:48 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Sorrow befalls me
that i should awaken
in a blood hazed mist
openly surrendering to death
as a betrayal of myself

to live unwanted
to feel no shame
wander around
in endless pain

what shall overcome
and take hold
to tear up inside my soul
what little piece hope and serenity
i behold

destiny's too far away
it shall fall upon this day
and take forever my innocense
away
for i cannot bear to stay
in a world where i am chased
and ever running away
from this endless pain

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-02-20 20:48:48]
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Re: Climacteric (User Rating: 1 )
by AbnormalPunk on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 09:22:40 PM AEST
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good... i guess... read my poem 'this noose named jesus'... gives the whole noose idea a little twist... please comment

Re: Climacteric (User Rating: 1 )
by GrantedLovable on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:07:25 PM AEST
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Very nice poem. I could relate to it in a lot, but I don't think I'd ever be able to put together the right words to express it like you did. I have to say your's is one of the best out there even though it's short. I wish you luck and love from those that care about you.

Re: Climacteric (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 11:11:59 PM AEST
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Good poem. Keep 'em posting...thanks for sharing!

Re: Climacteric (User Rating: 1 )
by russ-dawg on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 11:40:05 PM AEST
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awsome poem! keep up the good writting!

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