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Array ( [sid] => 85059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Naive [time] => 2005-02-20 14:12:18 [hometext] => Wishing I was little again, and I was naive and ignorant, and had no idea of the pain in the world we live in [bodytext] => The me you want
Is the me from the past
Only looking to play and to bask

Somehow the time went
And I grew more mature
And all the nights spent
Finding answers upon answers for sure

Dependence and Ignorance
Have somehow been lost
Deep inside I found the courage
And the path of growing up was crossed

Before I knew nothing
Of life and of love
And I was merely bluffing
If I said I'd been through enough

Sometimes I miss the old me
As I know you do, too
The me that was naive
And never knew the truth... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 48 [informant] => dreamer_for_eternity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Naive

Contributed by dreamer_for_eternity on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:12:18 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The me you want
Is the me from the past
Only looking to play and to bask

Somehow the time went
And I grew more mature
And all the nights spent
Finding answers upon answers for sure

Dependence and Ignorance
Have somehow been lost
Deep inside I found the courage
And the path of growing up was crossed

Before I knew nothing
Of life and of love
And I was merely bluffing
If I said I'd been through enough

Sometimes I miss the old me
As I know you do, too
The me that was naive
And never knew the truth...

Copyright © dreamer_for_eternity ... [ 2005-02-20 14:12:18]
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Re: Naive (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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very true i think we all miss those days where there wasnt a care in the world and where we knew what we were told was right and if told not was wrong i know i miss those times it seems so much harder to make decisions once you cross that line every and it seems moral is blurred
Great Write
Leana

Re: Naive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 06:31:28 PM AEST
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i miss the girl I used to be too. this is a good poem

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