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Array ( [sid] => 85021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => better days [time] => 2005-02-20 02:40:25 [hometext] => this poem is mostly about my people and how we are not living the life we should live..so go a head make coments and suggestions please. [bodytext] => Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

Here looking around my family is all deceased
Sitting down with my friends crying out please
Looking around for someone to help me retrieve
Back all my memories and cure this disease
isalamic is what they want me to believe

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days


But here they tell me a bullet in a head is
What I will get. But my faith got strengthen
And I will never let them see me sweat

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

I turn to the human rights and made a call
Hoping that I would be having it all
But oh lord how? When my enemies
Are preying to you for my downfall

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

My neighbor called me and wishes me well
But down in my heart I know they wish me hell
My friends and family are locked up in jail
And this judge set this unpaid able bail


Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days


Oh heavenly lord look down upon me
And unleashed this chains and set me free
And let me hear you say I deserve this liberty
For it is what runs in our arteries

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days



Copyright ©2004 JOHN MAKUER
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better days

Contributed by jmakuer on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:40:25 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

Here looking around my family is all deceased
Sitting down with my friends crying out please
Looking around for someone to help me retrieve
Back all my memories and cure this disease
isalamic is what they want me to believe

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days


But here they tell me a bullet in a head is
What I will get. But my faith got strengthen
And I will never let them see me sweat

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

I turn to the human rights and made a call
Hoping that I would be having it all
But oh lord how? When my enemies
Are preying to you for my downfall

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days

My neighbor called me and wishes me well
But down in my heart I know they wish me hell
My friends and family are locked up in jail
And this judge set this unpaid able bail


Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days


Oh heavenly lord look down upon me
And unleashed this chains and set me free
And let me hear you say I deserve this liberty
For it is what runs in our arteries

Time we look back and do something
For our lives and children’s to change
Hoping and wishing for those better days



Copyright ©2004 JOHN MAKUER




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Re: better days (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 08:50:45 AM AEST
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I like your poem. It is thought provoking. I too wish for better days for you and your people. My only comment is that you must be more trusting of we who wish you well.


Re: better days (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 02:46:52 PM AEST
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This is written so well..full of emotions . I hope things work out...
take care




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