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do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

have you ever felt this
i can't believe i am acting
like this love is crazy
it's crazy baby

how i still can feel your kiss how
i still can feel your lips against mine
how i still think of you every night

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

it's been so long, and i can't
even feel like i was so wrong
since the day you went away

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

Copyright ©2004 JOHN MAKUER
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do you ever

Contributed by jmakuer on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 02:37:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

have you ever felt this
i can't believe i am acting
like this love is crazy
it's crazy baby

how i still can feel your kiss how
i still can feel your lips against mine
how i still think of you every night

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

it's been so long, and i can't
even feel like i was so wrong
since the day you went away

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

Copyright ©2004 JOHN MAKUER

Copyright Â© jmakuer ... [ 2005-02-20 02:37:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: do you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 04:07:39 AM AEST
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Hmm another good poem.

do you ever think about me
do you ever dream about me
do you ever ask about me

I liked this lines the best, it says so much.

Re: do you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:35:28 PM AEST
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I like this one! Very good. I'm not crazy about the "have you ever felt..." stanza probably because of the shift in tone with the "it's crazy baby". Just came accross as less true then the rest of the poem. Good work as always.

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