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Array ( [sid] => 85010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ill love you forever [time] => 2005-02-19 23:51:24 [hometext] => [bodytext] => when i first met you it was all abit strange,
we started as friends but then it all changed,
my life was empty and nobody cared,
then you came along and nothing compared,
you helped me cope when i felt down,
my lips then smiled without a frown,
i love you so much it hurts me too say,
that one day you will be gone and ill hate that day,
ill love you forever without any doubt,
i will always remember what your love was about,
you liked me for me and not for the sex,
thats where it shows your not like my ex,
i know i have compared you alot to them,
but you made things better alot since then,
i love you alot and i wrote this for you,
and i dont care any more how much we argue,
i just want to tell you your one of a kind,
and your the only person thats on my mind,
together forever thats what we should be,
im glad i love you and that you love me,
i just wrote this poem to let you know,
all of my pain u helped me let go,
i know u have problems and i am here,
no matter how far ill always be near,
you've helped me get over alot of my fears,
through all of our laughter and all of my tears
im sorry for the things i shouldn't have said,
but i hope you understand that they'll run through my head,
i guess ive finshed what i wanted to say,
ill love you forever and hope you'll always stay.




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ill love you forever

Contributed by chazzay_2k5 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:51:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



when i first met you it was all abit strange,
we started as friends but then it all changed,
my life was empty and nobody cared,
then you came along and nothing compared,
you helped me cope when i felt down,
my lips then smiled without a frown,
i love you so much it hurts me too say,
that one day you will be gone and ill hate that day,
ill love you forever without any doubt,
i will always remember what your love was about,
you liked me for me and not for the sex,
thats where it shows your not like my ex,
i know i have compared you alot to them,
but you made things better alot since then,
i love you alot and i wrote this for you,
and i dont care any more how much we argue,
i just want to tell you your one of a kind,
and your the only person thats on my mind,
together forever thats what we should be,
im glad i love you and that you love me,
i just wrote this poem to let you know,
all of my pain u helped me let go,
i know u have problems and i am here,
no matter how far ill always be near,
you've helped me get over alot of my fears,
through all of our laughter and all of my tears
im sorry for the things i shouldn't have said,
but i hope you understand that they'll run through my head,
i guess ive finshed what i wanted to say,
ill love you forever and hope you'll always stay.








Copyright © chazzay_2k5 ... [ 2005-02-19 23:51:24]
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Re: ill love you forever (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:18:45 AM AEST
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sweet. needs a little polish for technical, but still a very nice write.
thanks for sharing


Re: ill love you forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:31:59 AM AEST
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Great write. I look forward to reading more from you.


Re: ill love you forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 03:21:56 PM AEST
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This is a nice write...what happens next..maybe part 2..take care




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