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Array ( [sid] => 85007 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silenced [time] => 2005-02-19 23:14:50 [hometext] => i dont know just came to me [bodytext] => I extend my arm
For you to grab
You have no acknowledgment of my existence
I plumet through the darkness
Screaming all the way
Why didnt you take my hand?
I sense cold hard ground
I see nothing
I feel nothing
I am nothing
I am gone
I have been silenced
Silenced by the ground below me
I take a hard blow to the head
You have silenced me
If only you had the heart
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Silenced

Contributed by Les4567 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I extend my arm
For you to grab
You have no acknowledgment of my existence
I plumet through the darkness
Screaming all the way
Why didnt you take my hand?
I sense cold hard ground
I see nothing
I feel nothing
I am nothing
I am gone
I have been silenced
Silenced by the ground below me
I take a hard blow to the head
You have silenced me
If only you had the heart
To grab me when you had the chance

Copyright © Les4567 ... [ 2005-02-19 23:14:50]
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Re: Silenced (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:09:35 AM AEST
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and in the nothing comes freedom.
nice write.
thanks for sharing

Re: Silenced (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:40:29 PM AEST
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this is shorter than your others and isnt as good in my opinion. i just dont like too much repeating of the same words, that is all. never stop writing.

Re: Silenced (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:44:54 PM AEST
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Sad write. I liked it though. Great work.

Re: Silenced (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 10:27:56 AM AEST
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Ouch. I felt this one right through. You have captured the feeling of abandonment with finesse.
Stitch

Re: Silenced (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Inside on Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:53:40 AM AEST
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Wow

great poem

I can relate to that alot

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