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Array ( [sid] => 84986 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To all of you Ladies [time] => 2005-02-19 19:09:19 [hometext] => Too many ladies fall for the same ol thing. Know your worth! [bodytext] => Check this rhyme that i mix
& these wishes that i list.
To all you ladies,
Who like Mercedes
Don't get played by he
Who promises a life of ease,

Cause when things go wrong
You won't see him for long.
And you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

(That’s why I mixed this rhyme,
to give you reason and time)

So i say to thee
Don’t be so easy
He better make a fight
for an exquisite delight

For it sure is hard
To find a love unmarred.
Cause you... could get a lawyer disbarred
For wanting your beauty unlawed

For that beauty you carry
Is the reason they wanna marry
But let it be for your heart
They'd tear their life apart.

Just adorn truth in your ways,
For its still you they will chase,
Then the inner you they will trace
And not in a way that’s debased

Check this rhyme that i mix
& these wishes that i list.
For if you follow what I say
A time of joy is your next day
But if my advice you shun
Then it’s your own heart you burn

So I will say it once more
Cause its you I adore

To all you ladies,
Who like Mercedes
Don't get played by he
Who promises a life of ease,

Cause when things go wrong
You won't see him for long.
And you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

Yes, you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

So i say to thee
Don’t be so easy
He better make that fight.
You are an exquisite delight
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To all of you Ladies

Contributed by Beniam on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Check this rhyme that i mix
& these wishes that i list.
To all you ladies,
Who like Mercedes
Don't get played by he
Who promises a life of ease,

Cause when things go wrong
You won't see him for long.
And you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

(That’s why I mixed this rhyme,
to give you reason and time)

So i say to thee
Don’t be so easy
He better make a fight
for an exquisite delight

For it sure is hard
To find a love unmarred.
Cause you... could get a lawyer disbarred
For wanting your beauty unlawed

For that beauty you carry
Is the reason they wanna marry
But let it be for your heart
They'd tear their life apart.

Just adorn truth in your ways,
For its still you they will chase,
Then the inner you they will trace
And not in a way that’s debased

Check this rhyme that i mix
& these wishes that i list.
For if you follow what I say
A time of joy is your next day
But if my advice you shun
Then it’s your own heart you burn

So I will say it once more
Cause its you I adore

To all you ladies,
Who like Mercedes
Don't get played by he
Who promises a life of ease,

Cause when things go wrong
You won't see him for long.
And you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

Yes, you'll be left alone,
To sing your fav sad song.

So i say to thee
Don’t be so easy
He better make that fight.
You are an exquisite delight

Copyright Â© Beniam ... [ 2005-02-19 19:09:19]
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Re: To all of you Ladies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:11:46 PM AEST
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This is gorgeous, I could just hear the words sung in my head. I love it. :o)

Take Care
- Becca

Re: To all of you Ladies (User Rating: 1 )
by MLCstar on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:15:44 PM AEST
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I don't like rap or hip hop at all, that is what I am guessing this is, but I adore your message. Keep it on and loud.

Re: To all of you Ladies (User Rating: 1 )
by jace on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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Awesome ben I always can imagine the music to this one
-jace

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