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Array ( [sid] => 84981 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Is this my fate? [time] => 2005-02-19 18:05:16 [hometext] => I wrote this after I saw constantine, it made me think of where I would go when I died... [bodytext] => Hell are you waiting for me?
Satin do you see me standing here.
Are you what my path is leading me too.
Are you my fate?
God have you seen through me, have you passed me by.
Will I see you when I die or will satin be my guide.
Hell are you what awaits me?
If I repent a thousand times will I go to heaven when I die?
Where will I go?
I will cry my eyes dry and scream for what awaits if hell turns out
to be my my fate.
Forgive me, you are my savior and I have let you down,
but don't send to me to the fires of the underground.
Save me is this my fate?
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Is this my fate?

Contributed by PoetBaby814 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:05:16 PM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Hell are you waiting for me?
Satin do you see me standing here.
Are you what my path is leading me too.
Are you my fate?
God have you seen through me, have you passed me by.
Will I see you when I die or will satin be my guide.
Hell are you what awaits me?
If I repent a thousand times will I go to heaven when I die?
Where will I go?
I will cry my eyes dry and scream for what awaits if hell turns out
to be my my fate.
Forgive me, you are my savior and I have let you down,
but don't send to me to the fires of the underground.
Save me is this my fate?

Copyright © PoetBaby814 ... [ 2005-02-19 18:05:16]
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Re: Is this my fate? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:46:34 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. If you except Jesus into your heart and live for the Lord you won't go to hell.

Scott

Re: Is this my fate? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 07:08:03 PM AEST
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Nicely done, though one could argue whether this place was hell. If its heaven you're searching for, then i'm sure its what you will find.

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