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Array ( [sid] => 84978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everything. [time] => 2005-02-19 17:50:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I never knew I could cry,
so sad,
I never knew I could hate,
So mad,
I never knew I could bleed,
It hurts,
I never knew,
Life could turn it's back.

When did it all change,
When did it all end?
When was I supposed to learn,
How to love,
How to forgive.

But that never came for me,
It all stopped when I turned 12.

I saw pain,
I learned hatred,
I was given scared when I was supposed to be given hope.

Because in a world like this,
that's what keeps you alive.

It shows you the light,
at the end of every night.
Where did my life go wrong?
When did everyone forget me?
When did I lose myself,
Where did I change,
Did I grow up?
Or have I just been wounded by war?
Left with eternal scars of life.

I was thrown into the crowd,
Before I knew how to walk,
and I got trampled over.

Because I lost everything,
and noone even noticed...
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Clocks [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Everything.

Contributed by Clocks on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:50:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I never knew I could cry,
so sad,
I never knew I could hate,
So mad,
I never knew I could bleed,
It hurts,
I never knew,
Life could turn it's back.

When did it all change,
When did it all end?
When was I supposed to learn,
How to love,
How to forgive.

But that never came for me,
It all stopped when I turned 12.

I saw pain,
I learned hatred,
I was given scared when I was supposed to be given hope.

Because in a world like this,
that's what keeps you alive.

It shows you the light,
at the end of every night.
Where did my life go wrong?
When did everyone forget me?
When did I lose myself,
Where did I change,
Did I grow up?
Or have I just been wounded by war?
Left with eternal scars of life.

I was thrown into the crowd,
Before I knew how to walk,
and I got trampled over.

Because I lost everything,
and noone even noticed...

Copyright © Clocks ... [ 2005-02-19 17:50:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Everything. (User Rating: 1 )
by imalive_enoughsaid on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 05:59:22 PM AEST
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wow...i relate to this so much i love it.. sorry you had to experiance such hurtful things in your life , but if you keep on going things will change soon..i know it. keep writing Great stuf ~T

Re: Everything. (User Rating: 1 )
by Opinionator on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:19:40 PM AEST
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Because you are so young, this is not a bad poem. You have a lot of room to grow. If I were you, in the future, i would write an explination of your poem where it gives the option of comments where you submit the poem. This allows the reader to better be able to identify the source of the poem. keep it up though. you'll get better with practice.

Re: Everything. (User Rating: 1 )
by Les4567 on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:24:24 PM AEST
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Its a good poem although sad its good some of the best poems are sad keep up the good work and dont give up

Re: Everything. (User Rating: 1 )
by Moonglow on Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 10:14:19 AM AEST
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Wow....bleak, i like it.

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