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The blood is infected
As it touches the razor blade
That is completely rusted
With conceptual hate and blame.

The pain can be traced
As far back as the edge
That left a disgrace
With emotions falling off the ledge.

There is no cure to make this go away.
Cutting the bloodless ice watered veins
Ensures this addiction is here...to stay,
And it reminds me that I can feel pain.

A pain that's blistering
And burning in my skin.
Forever unforgiving
I induce pain once again.

These are the scars that heal
From tainted razor blades
That remind me I can feel
With me being the only one
To blame. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Cutting to the Other Side

Contributed by essentially9 on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:41:53 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cutting to the Other Side

The blood is infected
As it touches the razor blade
That is completely rusted
With conceptual hate and blame.

The pain can be traced
As far back as the edge
That left a disgrace
With emotions falling off the ledge.

There is no cure to make this go away.
Cutting the bloodless ice watered veins
Ensures this addiction is here...to stay,
And it reminds me that I can feel pain.

A pain that's blistering
And burning in my skin.
Forever unforgiving
I induce pain once again.

These are the scars that heal
From tainted razor blades
That remind me I can feel
With me being the only one
To blame.

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-18 22:41:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 11:45:33 PM AEST
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magnificent,you 2 do very well together!

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Chicken on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 12:03:27 AM AEST
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A very good write...I can see that both of you have been there before, as have so many of us....but still a beautiful write

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:49:50 AM AEST
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Incredible write. There's so much sad emotion and it's very powerful. I really liked the flow too. You two make a great team. :-)

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 02:04:59 AM AEST
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I know exactly how yall feel. just to want the pain just to reasure that you have feeling left... great write yall... keep it up u 2 do good together... maybe yall should think of writing a nother one together.
God Bless.
*bebe

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 08:24:51 AM AEST
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This poem makes me sad. I can almost imagine the pain, and mental anguish in it.
It's written extremely well though, if it makes me feel these things.

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 06:14:03 PM AEST
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Wow so very poetic and heartfelt it is writes
like these that make me wish I could write
better than I do. I loved how you said the
razor was rusted with "hate and blame" that
was just BRILLIANT! I give it 5 gold starts you
guys should write another poem together.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Cutting to the Other Side (User Rating: 1 )
by allforyou on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 11:34:16 PM AEST
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That's a pretty awesome write you got there...my compliments

--Kara

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