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[aid] => mick
[title] => All At Once
[time] => 2005-02-18 21:41:03
[hometext] => ~If there were a stressed out category, I'd use it right about now. This one's about needing everyone in my life to just help me out right now. By the way, all spelling and grammar has been checked, so leave it alone~ (Note by Mod - spelling and grammar are never altered unless requested by the author at the time of posting)
[bodytext] => I’m driving round in circles on the rich side of the street. The snow makes an optical illusion; it’s all flying inside my eyes. There are a few tracks ahead but I’ll make my own, thanks. It’s amazing that I’m the only one who gets to see this part of the world from this angle. Once I’m gone, my tracks will lay behind me while everything else changes around them. The world forever imprinted; but nobody knows it but me. Rewind to my perspective; I’m driving round the horseshoe going toward my house. Angelic cotton-spread snow wafts down and smacks the windshield. The snowflakes in the foreground are the focus; their backdrop is the trees. If you look closely, very carefully, through the dense trees there lies the icy lake. A comforting sort of dark greens and blacker browns are wet from the cold. And there are houses on either side that I’ve only dreamed of living in “someday” And to get to “someday” I’ve got to: Gotoschoolpasschemistrygetgoodgradeslearnthosedancescompletethemusicallistentomymothergetajobearnlotsofmoneygraduateapplytocollegefigureoutsomekindofcareerchoicegetintoacollegemakeallkindsofplanstakeoutstudentloansmovetothedormsgotoschoolgetgoodgradeskeepthelove,thehope,thefaithalivegoonlivinghangontightpullthroughallthisshoweveryoneIcandothisstaycalmkeepmanagingthisstressdon’tletitgettome Someday will come! Eventually Eventually But I can’t do it all in one day I can’t explain it in one breath much less fast forward to the future Although that’s all I wish But But Someday will come and I know it. Hold my hand and I can show it I can feel it I can breathe it I can glow it But if there’s no one to hold my hand No one to make those lumps in my throat dissolve No one to get me through Someday won’t be the same So I pray that you’re there for me too So scratch my back and I’ll scratch yours as well So Someday can be as sweet as it’s magical spell [comments] => 5 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 63 [informant] => liquidsunshine [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
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