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Array ( [sid] => 84853 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => never let go [time] => 2005-02-18 14:11:55 [hometext] => i wrote this poem because somebody close to me went away...and everybody expects me to cry [bodytext] => I lost you
but I found myself
i can't make myself cry
why i'm i so senseless?

Is because of you that I know death
you left me behind
you coudn't care less
It haunts my mind

I can't let go
even though everybody thinks I have
because I don't like to talk about you
not even in pictures of a lost past

a lost past that I will never recover
i wanna forget it
and if I do
that doen't mean it never happen

I wanna scream
but no one to hear me
I wanna cry but no one to hold me tight

Is it my my fault that no one cares?
Is it my fault that no one understands?

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never let go

Contributed by disturbed_silence on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:11:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I lost you
but I found myself
i can't make myself cry
why i'm i so senseless?

Is because of you that I know death
you left me behind
you coudn't care less
It haunts my mind

I can't let go
even though everybody thinks I have
because I don't like to talk about you
not even in pictures of a lost past

a lost past that I will never recover
i wanna forget it
and if I do
that doen't mean it never happen

I wanna scream
but no one to hear me
I wanna cry but no one to hold me tight

Is it my my fault that no one cares?
Is it my fault that no one understands?

Copyright © disturbed_silence ... [ 2005-02-18 14:11:55]
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Re: never let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 05:15:14 PM AEST
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you have so much talent, that is easily seen. i loved your piece. whatever is best should be done, and the best is perspective, so its not wrong or right....

Re: never let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 09:06:40 PM AEST
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I cry to much lately, usually when i'm alone. It does relieve the hurting inside.

Re: never let go (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 10:02:56 PM AEST
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sometimes tears are there..sometimes not. I liked the poem..

Re: never let go (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:58:50 PM AEST
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sometimes crying doesnt relieve the emotion you feel,people cope with their emotions in different ways,i dont cry,i tend to release it other ways,in my personality it changes to what i feel its never the same lol
great poem,keep writing love han xx

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