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Array ( [sid] => 84822 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Gift [time] => 2005-02-18 02:02:07 [hometext] => This is my first posting here. Just a little poem I had put up on another site once, thought I would see what kind of feedback I got here. :) [bodytext] => I hear you cry of torment
Sense your sadness, your despair
See wounds that bleed your soul out
From a life in disrepair

Come to me in darkness
Brave the shadows and the mists
Let me sample of your flesh
Taste your blood upon my lips

Sweet solace from your anguish
This offer to you i make
My gift of twisted love
You have only but to take

Let me turn you from the light
It's pain that taints your soul
Embracing you in darkness
The night shall make you whole

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My Gift

Contributed by LadyWynter on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:02:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hear you cry of torment
Sense your sadness, your despair
See wounds that bleed your soul out
From a life in disrepair

Come to me in darkness
Brave the shadows and the mists
Let me sample of your flesh
Taste your blood upon my lips

Sweet solace from your anguish
This offer to you i make
My gift of twisted love
You have only but to take

Let me turn you from the light
It's pain that taints your soul
Embracing you in darkness
The night shall make you whole

Copyright © LadyWynter ... [ 2005-02-18 02:02:07]
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Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:40:49 AM AEST
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PRETTY WILD! IT HAS A GREAT STRIDE IN IT!! I THINK YOU SHOULD KEEP ON POSTING YOUR WORK HERE!!!

DAN!!!!

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 03:09:54 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC, you always have friends and a home here. hope you enjoy it.

this was trulyt a dark poem it had a flow about it that was plesently desterbing, I fell the dark mist that you speek of, I see the light fading, I feel the pain and dispare you portrayed in your words.

I too have had offers of this nature from some of my...less Faithful friends, but I am glad to say that I didnt accept. I do hope that this is just you writing and not any thing that is true, and if it is, please dont think like that, this kind of life is not some thing that you want no matter what you think. all in all this was a very good poem I did enjoy reading it, and I do hope that you will stay here with us. you do have a good talent. be strong and God bless.

wolfman

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 01:19:15 PM AEST
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That was your first post here ? I am truly sorry I missed that ... Welcome indeed to YPDC. I hope you find this place comforting. I know there are many here who have ...

This is very well written and caters to a dark corner of my persona ... I know of others who would appreciate this ... I'll point them this way ...

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:42:38 PM AEST
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Wow, what a fantastic poem..
Teehee, Nazzy pointed me this way, and I am most certainly glad he did.
I love this, I don't see anything about it I don't like.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx
(Who will definatly read more soon)

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 03:48:38 PM AEST
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INCREDIBLE!!! Absolutely flawless! Welcome to YPDC! I hope you find it comfortable and nice here! Beautiful first write, LadyWynter!! I loved it!! Can't wait to see more from you! All my love. Forever,

Your newest friend and fan,

Stephy! *Fleur*

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 23rd February 2005 @ 01:56:31 PM AEST
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yes I missed this too, thanks to Nazzy for giving me the link ;) that was brilliant, hope to read much more poetry by you soon
takecare
pix xx

Welcome to YPDC!!! :):)

Re: My Gift (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:13:28 AM AEST
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WOW!!!!! Tremendous poem!!!! Simply put WOW!

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