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[aid] => mick
[title] => Her Struggle
[time] => 2005-02-17 21:11:05
[hometext] => I wrote this poem for my niece some time ago. I'd like some input on what you think. Your comments are very much enlitning and appreciated
[bodytext] => Her life had started at an early age So much tragedy had come her way When many girls were having fun Her world as a mother had just begun Long long nights the baby would cry Noone around to watch as she tried The love she had given was not enough He didn't care, he treated her rough Eyes that did wander as women walked by A beating she'd get if she asked him why Names that he called her stabbed at her heart No matter the reason, he tore her apart The days that did come,the more she would yearn That once happy time whaen she was a girl No one would bother with all those demands No having to worry about child in hands But there she would stay in all that abuse For she felt unworthy and this he did use So well he had taught her with all that he gave He kept her around as his private slave One day she woke up for first she would see "Oh God please help me" she got on her knees "Give me the courage to take back my life To leave all this pain and misery behind I promise," she told God "to you I'll be true for both of my children and myslef too" "That man that I loved will never again control me nor ever touch me with his hand I can now see what had blinded before What you have created may no man destroy" "More than deserving of love and of peace Denied of these feelings this man kept from me but now that I've opened my eyes to the real I'll never go back to that love that did kill" "So precious this life with my children I share I promise to you I will raise them with care A mommy and daddy to them I will be Please God allow me form his hatred be free" "I will not look back to that time once ago Straight to the future where happiness grows At last I will kiss all the sadness goodbye Say hello to a new life, no tears in my eyes As I will take it one day at a time I know that the future I want will be mine" [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 21 [informant] => bibi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
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