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Array ( [sid] => 84765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Engulfed [time] => 2005-02-17 17:09:58 [hometext] => Here's one of my more unusual poems...as always, feel free to comment! [bodytext] =>
Engulfed
In the whirlwind
of my mind
Confusion blowing
Round and round
wild thoughts running

Unravelling
Begins slowly
mazes start to straighten
Against whipping phrases
I hold fast to solid thoughts
loosening slightly

Grasping
Nimble word patterns
fight to survive
Windtunnel forms quickly
Carried along thoughts
are lost in a jumble

Drowning
I try to pull them
so near to me
Awkwardly I tell them
Ferverent promises made
yes - we make sense.

Carol L.Chadwick [comments] => 5 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 43 [informant] => freckle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Engulfed

Contributed by freckle on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:09:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops




Engulfed
In the whirlwind
of my mind
Confusion blowing
Round and round
wild thoughts running

Unravelling
Begins slowly
mazes start to straighten
Against whipping phrases
I hold fast to solid thoughts
loosening slightly

Grasping
Nimble word patterns
fight to survive
Windtunnel forms quickly
Carried along thoughts
are lost in a jumble

Drowning
I try to pull them
so near to me
Awkwardly I tell them
Ferverent promises made
yes - we make sense.

Carol L.Chadwick



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Re: Engulfed (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:28:45 PM AEST
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About writing? That's what makes sense to me. I can relate. I had a problem with your caps though. Was there a rhyme or reason to them that I missed?
Stitch


Re: Engulfed (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:25:30 PM AEST
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No reason for the caps. I honestly didn't even look at them, I just pasted it from a disk that I made from my other computer. (Didn't sleep much last night...can I blame it on that? : )


Re: Engulfed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 09:44:27 PM AEST
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An intriguing piece on the mind... its complexity and the irrational tendencies in which we sometimes offer ourselves.
Thought provoking muse.


Re: Engulfed (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 03:30:54 AM AEST
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Truly an amazing piece of poetry!!!


Re: Engulfed (User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:16:41 PM AEST
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breathtaking




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