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Array ( [sid] => 84763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you [time] => 2005-02-17 16:37:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You had him in his prime,
you took everything of mine,
First love,
First kiss,
His tears as he'd miss,
Your love,
Your face,
Your lips,
The kiss.
He longs for you as he still does now,
your his every care your name everywhere,
Your rose in his room velvet dark red,
The blood from my arm,
The pain you both fed.
You both know that Im weak
My arm, my thigh, my eyes still leak..
From the start second best,
I know from the letters, her txts.
Ive heard to much to forgive and forget,
I know that in your head,
her face,
her love,
the things you both said.
They will never disapear,
Vanish
Or be gone,
This pain the same till Im taken from
My life,
Her name,
Till Im put to rest

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You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you

Contributed by imhearingvoices on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:37:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You had him in his prime,
you took everything of mine,
First love,
First kiss,
His tears as he'd miss,
Your love,
Your face,
Your lips,
The kiss.
He longs for you as he still does now,
your his every care your name everywhere,
Your rose in his room velvet dark red,
The blood from my arm,
The pain you both fed.
You both know that Im weak
My arm, my thigh, my eyes still leak..
From the start second best,
I know from the letters, her txts.
Ive heard to much to forgive and forget,
I know that in your head,
her face,
her love,
the things you both said.
They will never disapear,
Vanish
Or be gone,
This pain the same till Im taken from
My life,
Her name,
Till Im put to rest

Copyright © imhearingvoices ... [ 2005-02-17 16:37:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:35:30 PM AEST
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very intent powerful write I get several meanings from this very well done
Michelle

Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:15:38 PM AEST
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A good exploration of a fascinating topic.
Nice stuff.
Stitch

Re: You took everything from me, Yet I have never met you (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 02:49:57 AM AEST
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NICE POEM! ALOT OF FEELINGS PUT INTO IT!!IT'S LIKE A VOICE NEVER TO VANISH!!!

DAN!!!!

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