Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+ |
Custom Search
|
|
||||
Welcome ! | Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link | 29-May 17:11:20 AEST | ||
|
||||
|
||||
|
|
Array
(
[sid] => 84752
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Black Unicorn
[time] => 2005-02-17 15:56:53
[hometext] => i wrote this in 8th grade too... please comment, i know it's not that great, but i still want to know what you think
[bodytext] => His mane is black and is of gleaming silk. His muzzle is soft, as smooth as milk. The horn on his head is long and twisted He trotted by a small tree and barely missed it. Then his horn began a song, The song stopped it wasn’t long. There was a hum and twinkle sound Then a soft glow was all around He stopped his heavy fork-hoofed feet, Because there was someone special he would meet, He waited and waited for someone to show. Then came a creature as white as snow, She had four legs, a tail, and a graceful head. And left behind was a feather trail she shed. She was a Pegasus from above, And you could tell they were in love. Then they left before dawn’s light. She was the moon and he was the night. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 40 [informant] => NeonHusky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
|