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Array ( [sid] => 84714 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Trust [time] => 2005-02-17 07:58:16 [hometext] => self explanatory [bodytext] => I have a problem with trusting... you
You whom will surely hurt me, leave me ,
incorrectly read me ,mislead me
Then dismiss me as being one dementional.
Why should I trust you ?
Because you have a degree on the wall
that declares you a healer of the mind?
Because your Daddy handed you the keys to the church
that proclaims you a healer to the soul?
Personally , I don't expect nor demand trust;
I don't even trust myself. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 21 [informant] => purity [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Trust

Contributed by purity on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 07:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I have a problem with trusting... you
You whom will surely hurt me, leave me ,
incorrectly read me ,mislead me
Then dismiss me as being one dementional.
Why should I trust you ?
Because you have a degree on the wall
that declares you a healer of the mind?
Because your Daddy handed you the keys to the church
that proclaims you a healer to the soul?
Personally , I don't expect nor demand trust;
I don't even trust myself.

Copyright © purity ... [ 2005-02-17 07:58:16]
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Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Arsenic on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:09:32 AM AEST
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Very interesting. "I don't even trust myself. " Great ending, and ain't that the truth! Thanks.

ARSENIC

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:59:26 AM AEST
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Brilliant. I don't really know what else to say... I love this one, I've had similiar thoughts myself on more than one occasion. Very well written and it flows perfectly. Nicely done.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:12:27 AM AEST
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Woah. This is good. I have also had thoughts like this before, and I still do not trust myself.

Great write, keep it up,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 09:21:46 AM AEST
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Very interesting. I like the slice of perspective on a relationship. Some spelling things, but I'm sure you know about those.
Stitch

Re: Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 10:39:44 AM AEST
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You meant dimensional, right? It' s odd because if that IS a typo, it actually made me think of demented. How demented trust can be. Always with twist and turns, leaving us to not trust our own selves.
Nice truthful write!
Angel always...godspeed...joni

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