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Array ( [sid] => 84677 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => last kiss [time] => 2005-02-16 23:05:32 [hometext] => I don't know... symbolic... not many people understood the symbolism, I sort of like this though. leave me some feedback. please. [bodytext] => his fist kissed her face
and the fragile butterfly wings crumpled
before the shatter of the jaw
and the glass shards lit the room ablaze,

and her broken body bled a thousand,
a thousand apologies for something she
had never done; the eternities of wrongs
never committed.

standing bedazzled in the chamber
of his own undoing
gazing at the broken being
cast at his own feet,
the ears that never cared to listen heard the soul depart
with her last "I love you."

and the flash of steel acrost the room
drew him
like a moth to its flame
before the sparks of the fire
simply became
one
last
memory.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 32 [informant] => _myonlyone_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

last kiss

Contributed by _myonlyone_ on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:05:32 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

his fist kissed her face
and the fragile butterfly wings crumpled
before the shatter of the jaw
and the glass shards lit the room ablaze,

and her broken body bled a thousand,
a thousand apologies for something she
had never done; the eternities of wrongs
never committed.

standing bedazzled in the chamber
of his own undoing
gazing at the broken being
cast at his own feet,
the ears that never cared to listen heard the soul depart
with her last "I love you."

and the flash of steel acrost the room
drew him
like a moth to its flame
before the sparks of the fire
simply became
one
last
memory.

Copyright © _myonlyone_ ... [ 2005-02-16 23:05:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: last kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:53:25 PM AEST
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I think this poem is awesome.. Great job

Re: last kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:10:58 AM AEST
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great job... keep up the writes

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