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Array ( [sid] => 84670 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2005-02-16 22:09:06 [hometext] => bye YPDC [bodytext] => This is goodbye
Thanks for making me cry,
You said you’d always love me,
Thanks for just breaking free.

I am left now alone,
Thanks for turning off your phone,
There’s nothing left,
This is my last breathe.

I’ve tried too hard can’t go on,
My tablets have been sitting there for so long,
I am sat here giving you all a wave
Kiss my head as I sink into my grave.

You really don’t care.
If I was here or there,
So goodbye to you my friends,
Our friendship has come to an end.

I am sorry, sorry to all of you,
I just felt too deeper shade of blue,
Can’t go on too much pain,
Can’t wake up feeling this again
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 52 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Goodbye

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:09:06 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



This is goodbye
Thanks for making me cry,
You said you’d always love me,
Thanks for just breaking free.

I am left now alone,
Thanks for turning off your phone,
There’s nothing left,
This is my last breathe.

I’ve tried too hard can’t go on,
My tablets have been sitting there for so long,
I am sat here giving you all a wave
Kiss my head as I sink into my grave.

You really don’t care.
If I was here or there,
So goodbye to you my friends,
Our friendship has come to an end.

I am sorry, sorry to all of you,
I just felt too deeper shade of blue,
Can’t go on too much pain,
Can’t wake up feeling this again




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-02-16 22:09:06]
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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:30:49 PM AEST
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pixilator..don't feel blue..put on your fighting suit and get your fighting spirit back.. your part of YPDC's back bone...the sweetness..and light..


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:57:20 PM AEST
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Dearest Pixie,
U can't give up now ur such a fighter.
I believe in u, you've been through alot and you've made it this far.
I'm very proud of u .U have been able to clear all the obstacles that have stood in ur way.
I hope u reconsider Pixie and stay on for if u leave I shall miss u dearly.
Love,
Sue


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:56:23 AM AEST
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Hi Pixie

I know you are in a very bad place right now, but you are so strong girl. I know you are devasted about Mark leaving, and I can't imagine how you must be feeling, but I for one will always be here for you, and I'm sure many others on ypdc will be as well.

Please don't leave, you'll get throught this, and we'll all help you.

Love Dawny xxx


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 02:34:09 AM AEST
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Kriss pls don't go i know its hard to lose Mark but he'll come thrue hun, if you ever need to talk you know where to find me.

*Hugs*
Jane


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:17:43 AM AEST
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Why friend?..This is always a nice place..O.K ..come back. dear..venkat


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:09:59 AM AEST
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Omg! Krissie?! No...don't go! Why are you leaving? Please don't leave!!

Oh...
Please talk to me...

*hugs* Phil xxx


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:45:01 PM AEST
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Oh Pixie Please don't leave us!!!
You may feel so alone-BUT YOU ARE NOT ALONE-WE ARE HERE FOR YOU!!!!'
All of us at YPDC are with you!
We are Family We are Friends And We need each other and help each other because there is a common bond for all of us,
We share are most deepest,intimate, feelings from our hearts and souls.
Most people don't understand -But we do!!!!
You have made a difference in my life from you responses to my poems. You are special and very talented!!
Please don't leave us-We need you!!!

Love ya

Evelyn


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 04:03:21 PM AEST
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PIXIE!!!!

What happened chick??
I've not really been on here for quite some time now but you can't leave, who's gonna lol lol lol me when we're chatting on msn? I've pm'd my email address, please speak to me. We'll all help you through, this place just wouldn't be the same without our pixie, please, don't go!!

Love Ali xxxxx


Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 06:35:55 PM AEST
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I hope you will return to us. We/ I am here for you if you want. It would be tragic to lose you forever.




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