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Never want to tell you goodbye,
You deserve to be lay in my arms,
Forever to be shielded from harm.

It hurts me so much to see your tears,
I know I awoken all your fears,
But I hope that I have laid them to rest,
Every day I will try for you my very best.

To see you cry makes me feel ashamed,
I know I am the only one to blame,
I’ll spend the rest of my days by your side,
Where only happiness & love will collide.

I hope that we will make sweet history,
Always together is where we will be,
I never want to fall out with you again,
Put each other through unnecessary pain.

Here we sit on top of the world,
In each other is where we are curled,
From now on let us enjoy our love so true,
I just wanted you to know that I love you.
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Don't Want To See You Cry

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:21:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I don’t want to see you cry,
Never want to tell you goodbye,
You deserve to be lay in my arms,
Forever to be shielded from harm.

It hurts me so much to see your tears,
I know I awoken all your fears,
But I hope that I have laid them to rest,
Every day I will try for you my very best.

To see you cry makes me feel ashamed,
I know I am the only one to blame,
I’ll spend the rest of my days by your side,
Where only happiness & love will collide.

I hope that we will make sweet history,
Always together is where we will be,
I never want to fall out with you again,
Put each other through unnecessary pain.

Here we sit on top of the world,
In each other is where we are curled,
From now on let us enjoy our love so true,
I just wanted you to know that I love you.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-02-16 21:21:59]
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Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:32:30 PM AEST
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u r so meek and child like in your longing 2

understand love, your poem is of the upmost

in perfection . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:40:06 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet poem. You're a very mature person to realize your mistakes and a very well written piece has come out of it. Wonderful work! :-)

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:44:19 PM AEST
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Awww this is beautiful. I don't really know what else to say... its very well written, 5/5 definitely. Excellent.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 09:57:55 PM AEST
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im very impressed as always.

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Jonny_Angel on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:14:17 PM AEST
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I really love this one! Truly touching.

Jon

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:43:16 PM AEST
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A very good write as usual.

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:34:40 PM AEST
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I see a picture of you..on top of the globe..curled up with your ankles around your feet..ya know..and smiling? On top of the world..Pixie wings and all that.. so sweet and happy.. stay happy pixilator..

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:49:56 PM AEST
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impressive poem....it takes a real man (or woman) to admit when their wrong, I know I havn't always been the best at it...so I commend you for that :), again though, excellent poem

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:03:32 AM AEST
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a very well written poem, Pixie.
I really commend u for admitting u were in the wrong. Not alot of people have the guts to admit that they r wrong.
Keep up the great work

Re: Don't Want To See You Cry (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 01:13:34 AM AEST
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very good write.. i loved it ...

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