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but of my heartache you don't know.
Fatigued from constant attempts,
to have our two hearts together.

This never ending stress keeps building,
on my brittle body now.
And I can't help but anticipate,
For the time that I will be with you.

When alone, I wonder why...
and I feel my heart just tear.
While every ounce of compassion,
in my soul is fleeting other wheres.

You were once in my life,
in my vision.
But now my whole life is a
blur.

And I'm wondering why, after
everything we've been through,
that you wouldn't choose me over her.

Remember when together close,
you felt my heart against your hand.
And you told me right that moment,
that you'd always understand,

That you'd always be the first one,
to chase away the misery.
But all you fed me, was a load of
dishonesty.

Driving down the road in trance,
while memories vainly dance,
throughout my mind, I glance,
towards the sun- and am blinded.

Forever lost in one moment,
Eyes opened towards the sky.
I wished to be free from sorrow,
Arms reaching out, my soul has died.

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A lonely heart now

Contributed by setting_in_the_sun on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

You continuously torment my soul,
but of my heartache you don't know.
Fatigued from constant attempts,
to have our two hearts together.

This never ending stress keeps building,
on my brittle body now.
And I can't help but anticipate,
For the time that I will be with you.

When alone, I wonder why...
and I feel my heart just tear.
While every ounce of compassion,
in my soul is fleeting other wheres.

You were once in my life,
in my vision.
But now my whole life is a
blur.

And I'm wondering why, after
everything we've been through,
that you wouldn't choose me over her.

Remember when together close,
you felt my heart against your hand.
And you told me right that moment,
that you'd always understand,

That you'd always be the first one,
to chase away the misery.
But all you fed me, was a load of
dishonesty.

Driving down the road in trance,
while memories vainly dance,
throughout my mind, I glance,
towards the sun- and am blinded.

Forever lost in one moment,
Eyes opened towards the sky.
I wished to be free from sorrow,
Arms reaching out, my soul has died.

Copyright © setting_in_the_sun ... [ 2005-02-16 15:11:44]
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Re: A lonely heart now (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:28:07 PM AEST
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Awww this is so beautiful and yet sad at the same time. Niecely done.

Take care
- Becca

Re: A lonely heart now (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:48:03 PM AEST
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You're very much alive to feel this much pain. Moving poem. Good.

Re: A lonely heart now (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:23:53 PM AEST
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a piece such as this, cannot be copied.

Re: A lonely heart now (User Rating: 1 )
by Petznick on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:36:32 PM AEST
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so good, captured so much emotion in this write that i can relate to, very very well done
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