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~~~~
I couldn’t have been more proud
Walking you down the aisle
As all the onlookers
Saw your amazing smile
In your little blue jeans
And striped sweater
You held my hand
As we walked together

A look of interest
Outlined your face
As cars were lined
All over the place
From one to another
We took our turn
As desire in our hearts
Started to burn

My favorite was a pick-up
Yours a car
Mommies, a minivan
Similar to ours
What a day at the show
We had such a fun time
A day in dreamland
Suited us just fine [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 23 [informant] => Jeff_Scott_Morehead [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

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Contributed by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:06:40 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

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~~~~
I couldn’t have been more proud
Walking you down the aisle
As all the onlookers
Saw your amazing smile
In your little blue jeans
And striped sweater
You held my hand
As we walked together

A look of interest
Outlined your face
As cars were lined
All over the place
From one to another
We took our turn
As desire in our hearts
Started to burn

My favorite was a pick-up
Yours a car
Mommies, a minivan
Similar to ours
What a day at the show
We had such a fun time
A day in dreamland
Suited us just fine

Copyright Â© Jeff_Scott_Morehead ... [ 2005-02-16 08:06:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Auto Show (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:11:22 AM AEST
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Awww, this is so nice.
Family days are the best.
The first part of the poem, sounded almost like it was a wedding though. lol.

A lovely, cute, poem.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Auto Show (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:36:35 AM AEST
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I think I'm reliving my children being young through your poetry. With us, however, it was the boat show.
Stitch

Re: Auto Show (User Rating: 1 )
by Leslie on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 11:05:56 PM AEST
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Very nice. I really enjoyed it.

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