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It was the day I turned eleven
I had all my crew on the playground
And everybody was just around
I saw a plane taking rounds
And birds were just flying high in
The sky it was the day when everyone cried
for relatives, family and friends the day
When the plane crashed on the twin towers
And it was the day when terrorists
Gripped the state in the horrible hours
We watched many innocent people
Falling and dying,
And here comes the second plane flying in the sky
It was the time when I started to cry
I cried and prayed and then thought about
how to save the innocent
It seems like there was no one to save
And all that was left was a whole mess and graves

Copyright ©2003 John J Makuer
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911

Contributed by jmakuer on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:16:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

September 11th it was my birthday
It was the day I turned eleven
I had all my crew on the playground
And everybody was just around
I saw a plane taking rounds
And birds were just flying high in
The sky it was the day when everyone cried
for relatives, family and friends the day
When the plane crashed on the twin towers
And it was the day when terrorists
Gripped the state in the horrible hours
We watched many innocent people
Falling and dying,
And here comes the second plane flying in the sky
It was the time when I started to cry
I cried and prayed and then thought about
how to save the innocent
It seems like there was no one to save
And all that was left was a whole mess and graves

Copyright ©2003 John J Makuer

Copyright Â© jmakuer ... [ 2005-02-16 02:16:10]
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Re: 911 (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 03:05:16 AM AEST
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Very good.. It is nice to know that people still remember the most important thing of that day. The people.

Re: 911 (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 06:05:32 AM AEST
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My son's birthday is also on September 11 ... and something he will never forget - he turns 10 this year ... a sad way for a child to learn about life ... we'll never forget ... Jan

Re: 911 (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 11:18:03 AM AEST
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very nice tribute and a hard birthday. It was nice you thought of birds and the sky before that horrible thing had to happen.
God Bless the USA
Michelle

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