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Array ( [sid] => 84567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Follow Through [time] => 2005-02-15 20:36:17 [hometext] => Hmmm... Yeah, possible lyrics for a song my band's been working on, if I get some positive comments XD [bodytext] => Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse One:
Memories of a broken dream
Corrupted, cast aside, beaten down
Where will all of our foundations be,
When it all comes crashing down?
We support our leaders for a brighter tomorrow
And get abandoned in return
This wound we made on our world won't heal
And still there is no lesson learned.

Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse Two:
A life lived once care free
Now murders innocence with each passing day
The peace we once knew and loved
Was only the deceiving eye of the storm
To the world we are just one person
And that's all we shall remain
Poisoned minds choose our paths of life for us
Individuality is not an option any more

Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse Three:
When it all comes crashing down,
Feel free to shed a tear
When it all comes crashing down,,
Scream and someone just may hear
When it all comes crashing down,
Pray your future isn't thrown away
When it all comes crashing down,
Tomorrow may not be a better day [comments] => 4 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 34 [informant] => AKA_Anonymous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Follow Through

Contributed by AKA_Anonymous on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:36:17 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse One:
Memories of a broken dream
Corrupted, cast aside, beaten down
Where will all of our foundations be,
When it all comes crashing down?
We support our leaders for a brighter tomorrow
And get abandoned in return
This wound we made on our world won't heal
And still there is no lesson learned.

Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse Two:
A life lived once care free
Now murders innocence with each passing day
The peace we once knew and loved
Was only the deceiving eye of the storm
To the world we are just one person
And that's all we shall remain
Poisoned minds choose our paths of life for us
Individuality is not an option any more

Chorus:
Follow, follow, follow through
Deafened by internal screams,
Don't know what to do

Verse Three:
When it all comes crashing down,
Feel free to shed a tear
When it all comes crashing down,,
Scream and someone just may hear
When it all comes crashing down,
Pray your future isn't thrown away
When it all comes crashing down,
Tomorrow may not be a better day

Copyright © AKA_Anonymous ... [ 2005-02-15 20:36:17]
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Re: Follow Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:43:05 PM AEST
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I loved it for the mere fact that it has meaning to it, and I think it would make for a great song. Great write :)

xoxo Clem

Re: Follow Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Compton-tre-block on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:45:18 PM AEST
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LOVED IT..
ROCK? RAP?
DEEP &GRAPHIC
GANGSTA *****

Re: Follow Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 08:49:42 PM AEST
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This is an amazing piece !! So much emotions !! Great Write it would be a wonderful song ~!!

Re: Follow Through (User Rating: 1 )
by Taurusgem1 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:07:56 PM AEST
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Awesome... I say go for it

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