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Array ( [sid] => 84507 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make my dream come true [time] => 2005-02-15 09:24:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Last night

Something happened to me

I don't know whether it was right or wrong

I looked into mirror

But there was only you I could see, not me

I rubbed my eyes twice or thrice to see
Whether it was a dream or reality

I am still at a fix

What ever was that?

I’m happy for it

Do you know what I have experienced!

While I was in the middle of starring you

The mirror burst into pieces

And you came out

You were looking beautiful

More then any nymph

Sent from heaven above

You were dressed in your natural birth suit

N' your hair was long enough to touch the land

You came closer and your nearness caught my breath

Then you touched my face with your silky hand

Excitement reached up to it's extreme

I got enticing smell from your perfumed body

And we both lay down as a toast breast to chest

On the silky bed of rose

You covered my body with your

And bestowed me yourself for love's dose

I imbibed the nectar of your love

When I sip your juicy bosom

No words can tell you how I felt

It was really awesome

Whether it was reality or dream

What ever was that?

I am happy for it

For now I want you to enjoy it

Again with me

And turn this dream in reality!!!!

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => opusmind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Make my dream come true

Contributed by opusmind on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:24:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Last night

Something happened to me

I don't know whether it was right or wrong

I looked into mirror

But there was only you I could see, not me

I rubbed my eyes twice or thrice to see
Whether it was a dream or reality

I am still at a fix

What ever was that?

I’m happy for it

Do you know what I have experienced!

While I was in the middle of starring you

The mirror burst into pieces

And you came out

You were looking beautiful

More then any nymph

Sent from heaven above

You were dressed in your natural birth suit

N' your hair was long enough to touch the land

You came closer and your nearness caught my breath

Then you touched my face with your silky hand

Excitement reached up to it's extreme

I got enticing smell from your perfumed body

And we both lay down as a toast breast to chest

On the silky bed of rose

You covered my body with your

And bestowed me yourself for love's dose

I imbibed the nectar of your love

When I sip your juicy bosom

No words can tell you how I felt

It was really awesome

Whether it was reality or dream

What ever was that?

I am happy for it

For now I want you to enjoy it

Again with me

And turn this dream in reality!!!!





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Re: Make my dream come true (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:43:06 PM AEST
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not very dark, but still a fantastic piece.




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