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Array ( [sid] => 84494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Even if it takes forever [time] => 2005-02-15 04:02:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => everything she does,
it all makes you want to follow,
with every flick of her eyes,
thats a new image you too want to see,
with every turn of her hips,
you want to walk her way,
then every time she moves her lips,
you want to hear what she's got to say,
now shes the centre of your life,
her eyes the emralds in your dreams,
the sun in your desert visions,
the moon in your rommantic fantasies,
its like putting your hand through falling water,
you cant grab her, you cant have her, you cant hold her,
although you really want to,
she will never let you,
obsession,
greed,
inspiration,
everything that makes her live and breathe,
you want to own it, praise it, dote her with it,
but still you can never have her,
now the falling water gushes over your head,
pouring reality down onto your shoulders,
wakeing you up from this imaginary embrace,
shes standing watching you,
with a look of distress on her face,
now shes running,
running right out of your life,
now shes a dot in the horizon,
you could have grabbed her, held her, pulled her back just one more time,
now you wish you'd never met,
never seen her,
never wanted her,
but your heart beats so vivid in your chest,
a voice whispers
"go after her"
so you accelerate and run,
will you ever catch her,
you have forever to chase her,
you have forever to love her,
only your dying day will stop you now,
go try and get her,
if you succed we will be here,
but we will not wait for you,
nor will we believe you can,
but if you ever return we will be here,
now run little boy,
run till you are an old man....
forever... [comments] => 1 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 24 [informant] => in2thetwilightzone2 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

Even if it takes forever

Contributed by in2thetwilightzone2 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:02:22 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

everything she does,
it all makes you want to follow,
with every flick of her eyes,
thats a new image you too want to see,
with every turn of her hips,
you want to walk her way,
then every time she moves her lips,
you want to hear what she's got to say,
now shes the centre of your life,
her eyes the emralds in your dreams,
the sun in your desert visions,
the moon in your rommantic fantasies,
its like putting your hand through falling water,
you cant grab her, you cant have her, you cant hold her,
although you really want to,
she will never let you,
obsession,
greed,
inspiration,
everything that makes her live and breathe,
you want to own it, praise it, dote her with it,
but still you can never have her,
now the falling water gushes over your head,
pouring reality down onto your shoulders,
wakeing you up from this imaginary embrace,
shes standing watching you,
with a look of distress on her face,
now shes running,
running right out of your life,
now shes a dot in the horizon,
you could have grabbed her, held her, pulled her back just one more time,
now you wish you'd never met,
never seen her,
never wanted her,
but your heart beats so vivid in your chest,
a voice whispers
"go after her"
so you accelerate and run,
will you ever catch her,
you have forever to chase her,
you have forever to love her,
only your dying day will stop you now,
go try and get her,
if you succed we will be here,
but we will not wait for you,
nor will we believe you can,
but if you ever return we will be here,
now run little boy,
run till you are an old man....
forever...

Copyright © in2thetwilightzone2 ... [ 2005-02-15 04:02:22]
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Re: Even if it takes forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Onslaught on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 04:57:49 AM AEST
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Dang, good job. I think that sums up what a lot of people go through, even though we think that our situation is unique and that no one has ever felt the same way before. Its kind of a bummer that in order to reach something so good, sometimes you have to go through all the bad stuff on the way. There are a lot of special people out there, I sometimes think about how many people are out there and that they are all special in some way or another to someone else and that they all have these lives that they live full of happiness I hope but sometimes sorrow, yet I have no idea that they exist and they have no idea that I exist. Its just one of those things that you think about, after reading a poem as good as this one. Keep it up.

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