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Angel

Contributed by Snugglebear on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Falling falling
Slamming into the ground
Hitting rock bottom
I think I’m going to drown
My mind is swimming
In the vastness so deep
In the vastness
Where my heart should be
I can't feel my body
My mind can't even think
What has gonna so terribly wrong
I’m scared to even blink
The light begins to break
Tearing through the clouds
Ripping it to pieces
And angel booms aloud
He grabbed my hand
And carried me through
And showed me
What all I could do
He’s lifted me out
of my weary cage and doubt
This is my sweet guardian angel




Copyright © Snugglebear ... [ 2002-12-12 12:00:00]
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Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 02:00:12 PM AEST
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Yes this is the kind of angel I'm talking about in my one poem I posted the other day! Great write! Christina


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Nessiecat on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 04:33:48 PM AEST
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I have an angel like this, too. A true blessing.

Lovely poem :)

Nessiecat =^..^=


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by dantoad on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 04:41:25 PM AEST
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i can definately identify with this, i have one too! good write, something i know many others can relate to just as well as i.
-dantoad-


Re: Angel (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th December 2002 @ 11:45:41 PM AEST
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This is Brittany! U are so good at writing, and u really can express not only how u feel but how others feel too! Keep on doing what ur doing!! I luv ya!! bye!!


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by corbin286 on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 01:47:31 PM AEST
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wow this is one of the best poems i've ever read i love it. excellent write keep 'em comin


Re: Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by skitiger on Thursday, 18th September 2003 @ 08:05:46 PM AEST
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snugglebear I thought this was a really good poem. I'm printing it off to show every one
from skitiger




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