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Array ( [sid] => 84459 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken [time] => 2005-02-14 22:09:14 [hometext] => One more for the mrs... [bodytext] => I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

If the world was to crumble and fall, down on it's knees
You're the one that I will always love through it all, so please believe
That if your past came back to haunt you
I would be there to guide you through

And if you needed me to let you go I would
Just as long as you eventually came back to me
And I wish there was someway that I could
Be there with you right now, your what I need

I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

My feelings for you continue to grow stronger each day
As I am searching for you, but it seems there is no trace
Just the constant thought of you coursing through my veins
And I know this is what causes me so much heartache and pain

But at the same time, you are the one who takes it all away
Knowing that you are watching over me from up above
Is enough for me to make it through my darkest days
I know I don't need to tell you this, but I will love you always

I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

As time moves on and we look toward tomorrow, hoping for a change
I remember the torment and sorrow that caused you so much pain
Don't be sad and let the memories that you have drive you insane
Because I will always be here, whenever you need them taken away

Now I don't know what the future will hold for us, so many uncertainties
Too much going on in the world today, it's getting harder to breathe
But as long as we help each other through and stick together
Then there is no reason why we shouldn't believe in forever [comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Tobe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Broken

Contributed by Tobe on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:09:14 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

If the world was to crumble and fall, down on it's knees
You're the one that I will always love through it all, so please believe
That if your past came back to haunt you
I would be there to guide you through

And if you needed me to let you go I would
Just as long as you eventually came back to me
And I wish there was someway that I could
Be there with you right now, your what I need

I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

My feelings for you continue to grow stronger each day
As I am searching for you, but it seems there is no trace
Just the constant thought of you coursing through my veins
And I know this is what causes me so much heartache and pain

But at the same time, you are the one who takes it all away
Knowing that you are watching over me from up above
Is enough for me to make it through my darkest days
I know I don't need to tell you this, but I will love you always

I have been blinded, my eyes so blurred and unclear because I cannot see you
My soul empty and incomplete because you are that of which holds it's truth
And I have lost all feeling, as I have become so cold and numb
Because I will forever be broken until the two of us become one

As time moves on and we look toward tomorrow, hoping for a change
I remember the torment and sorrow that caused you so much pain
Don't be sad and let the memories that you have drive you insane
Because I will always be here, whenever you need them taken away

Now I don't know what the future will hold for us, so many uncertainties
Too much going on in the world today, it's getting harder to breathe
But as long as we help each other through and stick together
Then there is no reason why we shouldn't believe in forever




Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-14 22:09:14]
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Re: Broken (User Rating: 1 )
by Breezy1125 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 09:27:08 PM AEST
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i jus dont understand y u dont have any comments on these poems u got madd skills..and serious potential...and i really wanna be updated on your work...i wanna read everything u've ever written and i c that u're a dedicated writer...and i 2 also try 2 b...i would appreciate it if u cud keep in touch wit me...we cud share poetry and give feedback jus as this site does, ya kno? but most importantly i love how u relate 2 da ladies..well...110% u awready kno!!
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