Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 18:54:24 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 84433 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hard To Say [time] => 2005-02-14 19:28:49 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shut my mouth and open me up wide
Let these feelings rush out to the world
My life has changed, I'm not the same
And I don't mean to hide it

All those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life

My words are like water in my lungs
I choke on them rather than let them out
My hearts on fire and so inspired
And I don't mean to hide it
'Cause feelings mean nothing if never expressed

And all those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life

I've been on top of the world
running in circles all day
And when you're on my mind
I have the time of my life [comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stalkee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Hard To Say

Contributed by stalkee on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:28:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Shut my mouth and open me up wide
Let these feelings rush out to the world
My life has changed, I'm not the same
And I don't mean to hide it

All those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life

My words are like water in my lungs
I choke on them rather than let them out
My hearts on fire and so inspired
And I don't mean to hide it
'Cause feelings mean nothing if never expressed

And all those feelings that overwhelm me
when I see you walk by
They take me and tear me away
from all the pain of life

I've been on top of the world
running in circles all day
And when you're on my mind
I have the time of my life

Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2005-02-14 19:28:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Hard To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:44:21 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Very sweet poem. I love the 'words are like water' line.

Re: Hard To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:46:33 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

"I've been on top of the world
running in circles all day"

I like that.
Good ideas, keep writing.

--Ghosty

Re: Hard To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by noone on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:47:47 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

This is a great write...your emotions are clearly portrayed. Effective repetition. Well done!! Please post more.

Noone.

Re: Hard To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:33:15 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

:) i love it, i love it *cries*
"And when you're on my mind
I have the time of my life"
> a very interesting, true observation, perfectly said...well done, katie xx

Re: Hard To Say (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 11:01:14 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

oh, very nice stalkee. =]

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com