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Array ( [sid] => 84427 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cut deep and Hurting [time] => 2005-02-14 18:23:50 [hometext] => yea heres like a follow up to brken there will be more [bodytext] => Hurt and crying
Tears that have fallen are tears of love
Love that was one sided
Distance keeping us apart
Miles and miles
But that and storms can't stop my love for you
It was strong and proud to love a person sure as yourself
You gave me hope
Hope for a brighter future
It was something to look forward too
You broke me
You love was weak and fake
It was carried away in the vast rivers
I was there I seen you give up
Yea he reminds you of me thats why you gave up
Well he can have you cause he's not me
You deserve him, He deserves you
I'm the one whos better off alone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 2 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Cut deep and Hurting

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 06:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Hurt and crying
Tears that have fallen are tears of love
Love that was one sided
Distance keeping us apart
Miles and miles
But that and storms can't stop my love for you
It was strong and proud to love a person sure as yourself
You gave me hope
Hope for a brighter future
It was something to look forward too
You broke me
You love was weak and fake
It was carried away in the vast rivers
I was there I seen you give up
Yea he reminds you of me thats why you gave up
Well he can have you cause he's not me
You deserve him, He deserves you
I'm the one whos better off alone

Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2005-02-14 18:23:50]
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Re: Cut deep and Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 07:16:48 PM AEST
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very touching write
Michelle

Re: Cut deep and Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:21:03 PM AEST
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wonderful write...felt every word...

Re: Cut deep and Hurting (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 09:40:44 PM AEST
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no ones better off alone

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