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I wonder why you left me as I slowly die
Did you really have to tear me apart
So this is really good-bye

Fine then! I will just stay here
Until all my blood has left me
Death… Ha ha I have no fear
And I will not plea for thee

And I yell at you
“I don’t need you anymore.
I have what I want.
I hate you”
Then as the darkness falls on me
I say with my last breath
“But no matter how much I hate you
I will
…always….
... Love……
… You.”

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Valentines Day

Contributed by dalamar on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:05:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As the blood pours from the gash in my heart
I wonder why you left me as I slowly die
Did you really have to tear me apart
So this is really good-bye

Fine then! I will just stay here
Until all my blood has left me
Death… Ha ha I have no fear
And I will not plea for thee

And I yell at you
“I don’t need you anymore.
I have what I want.
I hate you”
Then as the darkness falls on me
I say with my last breath
“But no matter how much I hate you
I will
…always….
... Love……
… You.”

Copyright Â© dalamar ... [ 2005-02-14 13:05:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Valentines Day (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:05:47 PM AEST
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that was so emotional *hugs*
pix xx

Re: Valentines Day (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed the poem... It was really well written.

Re: Valentines Day (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 01:36:40 PM AEST
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I LOVED It
i wish i could write awesome poetry like all yous can!!
im just amatuer i guess haha

Happy Valentine's Day!!
this day means alot to my mom too, i love her, and she doesn't deserve to suffer, and i think im gonan write apoem about that!! dont worry, shes not dead, nor is my dad... but anyways
AWESOME WRITE!
i lvoe it
emotional too hunni
cya!
!JAZZ!

Re: Valentines Day (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:44:16 PM AEST
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hmmm-- Do I detect a mixed message here? A for effort, I suppose.

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