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Array ( [sid] => 84342 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unfurled [time] => 2005-02-14 02:57:46 [hometext] => when problems arise.. [bodytext] =>

baby

When stones and rocks at us are hurled,
Our personality defects are unfurled;
Tough times bring out our inside flaws
for that is when we unsheathe our claws.
We pick up rocks and we attack
hit and scratch and throw them back.
Fight and claw and hit and spit,
In red hot anger's hissy fit.
I think that it's a crying shame
because it is a children's game.
But when we feel hurt at heart
our inner child comes apart.
In our mouth we need a sock
instead we bend and get a rock..
In a wound, we rub the salt
and I too, have been at fault.
I could wipe my tears and turn my back,
but instead, I turn my hurt into attack.
I don't know what to call this poem..
Take my marbles and go home?
©fuzzywuzzy2005 [comments] => 6 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 61 [informant] => fuzzywuzzy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Unfurled

Contributed by fuzzywuzzy on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:57:46 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

baby

When stones and rocks at us are hurled,
Our personality defects are unfurled;
Tough times bring out our inside flaws
for that is when we unsheathe our claws.
We pick up rocks and we attack
hit and scratch and throw them back.
Fight and claw and hit and spit,
In red hot anger's hissy fit.
I think that it's a crying shame
because it is a children's game.
But when we feel hurt at heart
our inner child comes apart.
In our mouth we need a sock
instead we bend and get a rock..
In a wound, we rub the salt
and I too, have been at fault.
I could wipe my tears and turn my back,
but instead, I turn my hurt into attack.
I don't know what to call this poem..
Take my marbles and go home?
©fuzzywuzzy2005

Copyright Â© fuzzywuzzy ... [ 2005-02-14 02:57:46]
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Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:02:56 AM AEST
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Great write! Awesome flow.

Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by mae04 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 03:15:20 AM AEST
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nicee
the ryming is awesome

Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 09:43:22 AM AEST
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Gee Mary, I see leavng forever means for less than 24 hour...and with multiple accounts again too. hrtbrknbear is you too. How stupid do you think people are here anyway? I guess this is a personal attack on you but hey, you can break site rules whenever you feel like it and get away with it scott free so I guess I can too huh.

Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by fuzzywuzzy on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 02:19:24 PM AEST
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someone making public attics?

Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:22:14 PM AEST
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Mr. Carlin..this was my grandaughter's write. (Raeven) the other acct. you speak about is Alyssa..the younger one..you said you could tell my writing with your eyes closed..open them now..this is me..HERE. Maybe it's in the the blood.. Raven write's better, Alyssa is more into art..fantasy..mermaid's..dragons.. read it again and you'll see the counting is a wee bit off.. they got to visit for the 3 day week end..next week too.. I'm glad they like to write..the accounts are legit and we don't think anyone is stupid.. as for the 24 hours..it is hard not to write when you love it so.. That's why I worked so hard to keep you writing..because I know you love it..or thought you did.. Hi Raeven..Hi Ally..we got him..LOL

Re: Unfurled (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:27:25 PM AEST
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Awesome poem.

Scott

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