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Array ( [sid] => 84334 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive [time] => 2005-02-14 00:38:26 [hometext] => ~juxtaposition, you're on the scale stale lover~ [bodytext] => did you know
you could hold the magnetic force of my world
you could make the arrow of anguish decrease
make it worthless
if you told me everyday that i'm beautiful to you
but you only beg me to eat
your words are forming only another tool
of regret
i am a product frail and used
standing on the quivering arrow of choice
and i choose whatever gets me love
if that is less, i will be less

but you don't abolish doubt
you don't hold me close
no i am 88 pounds of emptiness
when will you pull the arrow from the scale
break the tranfix i have on what i cannot survive
tell me everyday that i'm beautiful

you are the only emblem of beauty in my world [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 55 [informant] => weepingprophet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive

Contributed by weepingprophet on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:38:26 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

did you know
you could hold the magnetic force of my world
you could make the arrow of anguish decrease
make it worthless
if you told me everyday that i'm beautiful to you
but you only beg me to eat
your words are forming only another tool
of regret
i am a product frail and used
standing on the quivering arrow of choice
and i choose whatever gets me love
if that is less, i will be less

but you don't abolish doubt
you don't hold me close
no i am 88 pounds of emptiness
when will you pull the arrow from the scale
break the tranfix i have on what i cannot survive
tell me everyday that i'm beautiful

you are the only emblem of beauty in my world

Copyright © weepingprophet ... [ 2005-02-14 00:38:26]
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Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:06:03 AM AEST
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even when someone tells me that I'm pretty..I don't believe it.. I like this write

Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:38:36 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said. U need to get thelp to gain weight. My youngest daughter was 80 something pounds not long ago but she finnaly got a great Dr. that helped her and now she weighs 100lbs. and is very happy with her new husband. No man is worth u loosing your life over if he is abusing u in any way.
U must live for yourself.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: The Transfix of What I Cannot Survive (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 28th June 2005 @ 12:07:37 PM AEST
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quivering arrow of choice
I love that line
good flow too....

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