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Array ( [sid] => 84318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Things You Say Hurt [time] => 2005-02-13 22:46:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The things you say to me
Make me hurt inside
What have I done to make you hate me
I have done my best to be good
And not disappoint you
But nothing is good enough obviously
You said that you can't stand me
I hardly ever talk to you
I'm usually locked up in my room
Just to stay away from you
Then all you do is complain because it's all I ever do
When you said today
That I make you sick
I said I make you sick?
And all you said was yes
I felt like crying endlessly
But I couldn't show you the satisfaction you seem to be seeking
I just am confused on what I have done wrong
I will just continue hurting inside
And hide my tears from you
I will just wait until I hear what else I have done to you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 48 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

The Things You Say Hurt

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:46:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The things you say to me
Make me hurt inside
What have I done to make you hate me
I have done my best to be good
And not disappoint you
But nothing is good enough obviously
You said that you can't stand me
I hardly ever talk to you
I'm usually locked up in my room
Just to stay away from you
Then all you do is complain because it's all I ever do
When you said today
That I make you sick
I said I make you sick?
And all you said was yes
I felt like crying endlessly
But I couldn't show you the satisfaction you seem to be seeking
I just am confused on what I have done wrong
I will just continue hurting inside
And hide my tears from you
I will just wait until I hear what else I have done to you

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2005-02-13 22:46:41]
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Re: The Things You Say Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 10:08:43 PM AEST
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you have done nothing to her...

Re: The Things You Say Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:20:36 PM AEST
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wounderful work,and you don't make her sick,she only makes herself sick cause she
hates herself and just pointing it at you,so just
ignore it!

Re: The Things You Say Hurt (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 01:19:43 AM AEST
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Hmmm.....Okay so your mother hates you yet you have no Idea why....Well...I sure would'nt want to be her child....She must really hate herself to truly hate you...Overall I enjoyed your poem and you expressed your feelings well

Clark

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