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Array ( [sid] => 84298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i knew [time] => 2005-02-13 21:24:14 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => i knew i liked you
i knew we were alike
in so many ways
i knew we were sumthin special

we talked constently
mostly we talked about the future
making me think we would last

one thing i knew for sure...
i would do anything for you
i was truely happy
that you cared
but wen you kissed me
i knew i as in love

happily ever after, rite?
WRONG
after all we went through
why would you hurt me as bad as you did
i gave you my heart
and you broke it into pieces
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 24 [informant] => visualizing_life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

i knew

Contributed by visualizing_life on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:24:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

i knew i liked you
i knew we were alike
in so many ways
i knew we were sumthin special

we talked constently
mostly we talked about the future
making me think we would last

one thing i knew for sure...
i would do anything for you
i was truely happy
that you cared
but wen you kissed me
i knew i as in love

happily ever after, rite?
WRONG
after all we went through
why would you hurt me as bad as you did
i gave you my heart
and you broke it into pieces

Copyright © visualizing_life ... [ 2005-02-13 21:24:14]
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Re: i knew (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:30:32 PM AEST
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I can really relate. I understand those feelings of having your heart smashed, I really do. I always wonder those questions. But don't give up, someone will come and tape those peices back together. I know it.

Re: i knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Kachina on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:44:16 PM AEST
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This is a really nice piece. Though, make sure your preview your poem before you submit it. I understand though, I've goofed up some words to. Anyways...keep up the good work.

Re: i knew (User Rating: 1 )
by Sir_Odd87 on Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 05:39:10 AM AEST
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wow... cretin, eh?

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