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Are You
Contributed by
Jonny_Angel
on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Why is it that my heart wrenches so
When the warmth of your smile charms me.
A feeling of longing that oversees
My soul, yearning for yours to know.
Trapped in the shadows of my own woe,
I call a tear to my eye and weep.
Wishing for a kiss like yours to keep,
A trade, for that heart of mine you stole.
Are you the one that I've been searching for,
Whose aura glistens like sweet morning dew.
You've given me a reason to soar,
To shed my phony wings and start anew.
I'll promise my heart, my soul, forevermore,
If you can answer "yes" to one question...
Are you?
Copyright ©
Jonny_Angel
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2005-02-13 16:55:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Are You
(User Rating: 1 ) by allforyou on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:06:48 PM AEST (User
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love it
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Re: Are You
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:27:16 PM AEST (User
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I kinda like how your rhyme changes halfway through, it didn't make the poem clumsy, which is a hard thing to manage.
This is sweet. I can relate in odd little ways.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Are You
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:36:44 AM AEST (User
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Fabulous really liked this one
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Are You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th February 2005 @ 01:45:25 AM AEST (User
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This is a very sweet write. Great work! |
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