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Array ( [sid] => 84252 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben [time] => 2005-02-13 16:07:55 [hometext] => Such beautiful talent and poetry will no longer be shared with us. [bodytext] => Afterdark has gone it's sad to see
Another member is leaving that is dear to me
Dorian Chambers known as Ben
Showed us beautiful poetry written from his pen
He had such a way of expressing himself
I wished I had half his talent myself
His poetry bought such joy to my heart
Now he's leaving and it's breaking me apart
Someone commented on his poem, that was brash
I wished I could turf this comment in the trash
Losing Ben from this poetry site will mean
Those beautiful expressed poems will no longer be seen
People can comment without been crude
Getting there point across without been rude
So dearest Ben is this the final goodbye?
I hope you reconsider before tears flood my eyes
Out of all the friends I've ever known
The deepest respect and wisdom you have shown
So farewell to you my dearest friend
A lifetime of gratitude to you I send [comments] => 6 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 52 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben

Contributed by mina-1 on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:07:55 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Afterdark has gone it's sad to see
Another member is leaving that is dear to me
Dorian Chambers known as Ben
Showed us beautiful poetry written from his pen
He had such a way of expressing himself
I wished I had half his talent myself
His poetry bought such joy to my heart
Now he's leaving and it's breaking me apart
Someone commented on his poem, that was brash
I wished I could turf this comment in the trash
Losing Ben from this poetry site will mean
Those beautiful expressed poems will no longer be seen
People can comment without been crude
Getting there point across without been rude
So dearest Ben is this the final goodbye?
I hope you reconsider before tears flood my eyes
Out of all the friends I've ever known
The deepest respect and wisdom you have shown
So farewell to you my dearest friend
A lifetime of gratitude to you I send




Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-02-13 16:07:55]
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Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 04:23:50 PM AEST
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this is sad. Ben if you read this please dont go I feel we need to gang up on these ppl and throw out the trash from the halls of ypdc there is no sense of all this going on and ppl leaving.The trouble makers should be the ones on the way out the door! I dont know what happend to afterdark but I hate to see that also ! COme on ppl lets stop this!

This was a heartfelt write to Ben I agree with you!


Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:09:17 PM AEST
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i came 2 write and maybey make some one's day a little better, i think i've accomplished that . . . i'll not take that enjoyment away from any one, it's
not the end of the world and i'm thankful 4 all the support i have received . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:11:18 PM AEST
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BOTTOM LINE, I'M STAYING . . .

DORIAN CHAMBERS


Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:28:56 PM AEST
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great dedication to a very talented writer... I also enjoy his work, i love every poem he writes, I'm glad we have the opportunity to read them...he better stay :)

Curtis


Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 08:45:40 AM AEST
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this is so sad, Ben will be missed so much, his poetry was beautiful and meaningful,
pix xx


Re: Poem For Dorian Chambers : Ben (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 01:36:57 PM AEST
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good Ben..proud of you..you have NOIVE...(smiles and winks*)




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