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Array ( [sid] => 84239 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Acid Heart [time] => 2005-02-13 14:57:33 [hometext] => About a girl at school [bodytext] => I try to talk to you,
a wall just appears.
I try my best to appease you.
Nothing seems to work.
You just walk around head held up high.
You look down at me,
quickly looking away.
Have you got no heart?
I try to rise beside you,
I always get dejected.
The course I run is long, hard and not too fun.
Will I ever win your friendship?
I really think not.
Single words you say to me,
are as gold for I will treasure them forever.
I always think about you,
reruns go over and over again.
Movies of you shunning me out.
What did I do?
Please forgive me for I had not known.
What I did to you is still a mystery.
Only you can tell me.
For whatever I did,
I wish I had not.
For you are amazing and
I truly look up to you.
You burn my heart with acid
by the actions that you’ve done.
It never ceases,
and will always pour until.
Until the day,
you finally say,
“Hello friend, do you want to play?”
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Crimson_Valley [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Acid Heart

Contributed by Crimson_Valley on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:57:33 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I try to talk to you,
a wall just appears.
I try my best to appease you.
Nothing seems to work.
You just walk around head held up high.
You look down at me,
quickly looking away.
Have you got no heart?
I try to rise beside you,
I always get dejected.
The course I run is long, hard and not too fun.
Will I ever win your friendship?
I really think not.
Single words you say to me,
are as gold for I will treasure them forever.
I always think about you,
reruns go over and over again.
Movies of you shunning me out.
What did I do?
Please forgive me for I had not known.
What I did to you is still a mystery.
Only you can tell me.
For whatever I did,
I wish I had not.
For you are amazing and
I truly look up to you.
You burn my heart with acid
by the actions that you’ve done.
It never ceases,
and will always pour until.
Until the day,
you finally say,
“Hello friend, do you want to play?”

Copyright Â© Crimson_Valley ... [ 2005-02-13 14:57:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Acid Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:13:56 PM AEST
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all i have to say is dont waste your time on someone who doesnt want to be your friend becaue when they are they will only use you becaue those self centerd people have no heart at all
Leana

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