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Array ( [sid] => 84208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In My Eyes [time] => 2005-02-13 05:47:19 [hometext] => I wrote this song for a chick that I liked a while ago... [bodytext] => I've been thinking about you a lot ever since I first met you
Which leads me to believe that you are someone that I never want to lose
The feelings that I have for you are getting harder and harder to deny
Because they grow stronger as each moment passes me by

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

Your the one who puts a smile back on my face
Even when it seems like everything has fallen far from grace
And just when I feel like I'm going to fall apart, not being able to cope
I think of you, look deep inside my heart, and know that there is hope

On that night, I walked with you for what seemed like an eternity
And I would do it all again just so that you could spend another moment with me
Just to know that your safe and out of harms way
Gives me the strength to get through my darkest days

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

I want to be there through the good and the bad times
Because I care about you more than what words can describe
And I want you to know with whatever you decide
I will always be there by your side

I would turn back the pages of time
Just to know that you could one day be mine
And I would travel faster than the speed of light
Just to know that you are alright

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

From the heart is where these words have been spoken
It is where I keep my deepest and most truthful emotions
And I don't know what else I can say or do to prove
Just how much that I do... love you
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In My Eyes

Contributed by Tobe on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:47:19 AM in AEST
Topic: didactic



I've been thinking about you a lot ever since I first met you
Which leads me to believe that you are someone that I never want to lose
The feelings that I have for you are getting harder and harder to deny
Because they grow stronger as each moment passes me by

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

Your the one who puts a smile back on my face
Even when it seems like everything has fallen far from grace
And just when I feel like I'm going to fall apart, not being able to cope
I think of you, look deep inside my heart, and know that there is hope

On that night, I walked with you for what seemed like an eternity
And I would do it all again just so that you could spend another moment with me
Just to know that your safe and out of harms way
Gives me the strength to get through my darkest days

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

I want to be there through the good and the bad times
Because I care about you more than what words can describe
And I want you to know with whatever you decide
I will always be there by your side

I would turn back the pages of time
Just to know that you could one day be mine
And I would travel faster than the speed of light
Just to know that you are alright

I've watched you from a distance for so long
And the more I think about it, it doesn't seem at all wrong
In my eyes you are the most beautiful person that could ever be
Would it be so hard for you to believe that you mean everything to me?

From the heart is where these words have been spoken
It is where I keep my deepest and most truthful emotions
And I don't know what else I can say or do to prove
Just how much that I do... love you




Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-13 05:47:19]
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Re: In My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:27:44 AM AEST
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Aww this was really sweet, i like the way you composed this Toby this was really a good song. Keep them coming.

Jane xxx


Re: In My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:03:01 AM AEST
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This was a wonderful song! Its one of the sweetest things a guy can do great job!


Re: In My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by dtborchert on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:22:40 AM AEST
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It is truly honest piece and honesty is the best that any one could possible want when love it involved. It is truly beautiful, it really touched my heart. Keep on writing.


Re: In My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 10:14:17 PM AEST
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this is such a beautiful sweet song Toby.
expressed so well.


Re: In My Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Tobe on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 11:57:15 PM AEST
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Well...

Thanks for the comments guys, unfortunatly this song, flowers, and a prom ticket wasn't enough...

But I've moved on now anyway, it was hard yes, but it was for the best...




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