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Array ( [sid] => 84193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => too late for me [time] => 2005-02-13 00:21:46 [hometext] => please comment... [bodytext] => It started off great….
You would make me laugh…
And always got me stuff….

I could be myself around you…
3 weeks passed….
And then you started to change…

You would get mad when I would hang out with my friends…
You tried to keep me away from my “guy friends”
You were starting to yell at me when you would call …
And I wouldn’t call you back…

At first you raised your hand t me….
When we would fight…
Or you would give me little shoves…

I don’t know why I didn’t leave you…
I’m was so dumb….
I was nervous around you…

I didn’t tell any one what you were doing…
Instead I just “sucked it up”
And did hat ever you said…

I told myself you would never really hit me…
At worst you’d give me a shove…
But I was wrong…

I told you I was sick….
So I couldn’t hang out with you…
But I really just wanted to hang out with my friends…

I told you don’t come over…
I was contagious…
You said ok…

But then my friends came to pick me up…
We went to the mall ….
It was so much fun…

But when they dropped me off…
Back at my house…
I saw your car out front…

I didn’t want my friends to leave me..
But I couldn’t tell them what was going on…
So I got out of their car…

And hoped you wouldn’t get mad…
And before I even got to the door…
I felt your “wrath”
You were hitting me so hard…

I’m surprised I’m alive….
Once you were done…
You got in your car and left…

When my parents got home…
I was still out on the porch…
Just barely conscious…

They put me in the car..
And rushed me to the ER
Where I stayed for 2 weeks…

My parents asked me what happened…
And I didn’t want to say…
But because of you I’m paralyzed
From my waist down…

So I told them you did it…
And now your in jail…

And that is my story…
(there are hotlines for ppl in abusive relationships! GET HELP BEFORE IT”S TOO LATE)
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 279 [topic] => 66 [informant] => morgana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
too late for me

Contributed by morgana on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:21:46 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



It started off great….
You would make me laugh…
And always got me stuff….

I could be myself around you…
3 weeks passed….
And then you started to change…

You would get mad when I would hang out with my friends…
You tried to keep me away from my “guy friends”
You were starting to yell at me when you would call …
And I wouldn’t call you back…

At first you raised your hand t me….
When we would fight…
Or you would give me little shoves…

I don’t know why I didn’t leave you…
I’m was so dumb….
I was nervous around you…

I didn’t tell any one what you were doing…
Instead I just “sucked it up”
And did hat ever you said…

I told myself you would never really hit me…
At worst you’d give me a shove…
But I was wrong…

I told you I was sick….
So I couldn’t hang out with you…
But I really just wanted to hang out with my friends…

I told you don’t come over…
I was contagious…
You said ok…

But then my friends came to pick me up…
We went to the mall ….
It was so much fun…

But when they dropped me off…
Back at my house…
I saw your car out front…

I didn’t want my friends to leave me..
But I couldn’t tell them what was going on…
So I got out of their car…

And hoped you wouldn’t get mad…
And before I even got to the door…
I felt your “wrath”
You were hitting me so hard…

I’m surprised I’m alive….
Once you were done…
You got in your car and left…

When my parents got home…
I was still out on the porch…
Just barely conscious…

They put me in the car..
And rushed me to the ER
Where I stayed for 2 weeks…

My parents asked me what happened…
And I didn’t want to say…
But because of you I’m paralyzed
From my waist down…

So I told them you did it…
And now your in jail…

And that is my story…
(there are hotlines for ppl in abusive relationships! GET HELP BEFORE IT”S TOO LATE)




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Re: too late for me (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymussme on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:33:47 AM AEST
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very well written. i have been through a few relationships like yours though it never went that far. im sorry though, about yours


Re: too late for me (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 11:02:09 PM AEST
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Thankfully you finally said something! I was deeply in love with a guy once who hit me just once; that was it. I knew I had to let him go. I was hard but I am so glad I did. Be strong, you deserve better!




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