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Acidic rain
Stains the page
And my rage
Dulls this pain

Another work of art
Is torn apart

The ink's in disarray
And the page
Is now completely frayed
To the dullest gray

As the written heart
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Poet's Rage

Contributed by essentially9 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Poet's Rage

Acidic rain
Stains the page
And my rage
Dulls this pain

Another work of art
Is torn apart

The ink's in disarray
And the page
Is now completely frayed
To the dullest gray

As the written heart
Stops beating in the work of art

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-02-12 23:40:35]
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Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:43:19 PM AEST
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very good stuff Jennifer... keep it up!

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:52:47 PM AEST
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Short and powerfully effective. (I always tell people not to tick me off, since I'm a writer. Could be dangerous.) I like the way you bring all that anger to bear in a short write - like a bullet to the heart of the matter. Blessings.

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Nardo on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:56:27 PM AEST
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OOUCH! I felt that one. Powerful.
Nardo

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Xnoybis on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:13:51 AM AEST
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I like this one. Short controlled bursts and right to the point. I also have a penchant for artists that destroy their own work, or at least the concept.

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:21:20 AM AEST
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I think this is my favorite out of all your poems I've read...Masterful and beautiful Jennifer
=]
Clark

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 02:31:23 AM AEST
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clever stuff especially the last two lines, great work.

Johnny.

Re: Poet's Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 10:39:43 AM AEST
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oh. I really like this one. Powerful and it gets right to the point. Another beautiful write.

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