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Array ( [sid] => 84187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => **THE ANGEL A'TOP MY TREE** [time] => 2005-02-12 23:17:06 [hometext] => For My Friend Patrick [bodytext] => ** I wasn't sure what to get you 4 Christmas* *‘cause I wasn't sure what angels like* *but i thought that you might like this poem* *and I hope that I am right* *because this poem describes an angel* *of the genuine type* *a star lit in the black and endless* *darkness of the night* *a ray of hope through all the pain* *there shining bright* *a sweet and tender whisper* *to let us know that everything's alright* *the one who taught me that no matter what,* *things could be worse* *but once they've hit rock bottom* *they'll get better first* *because through all the shadows round you* *you still see* *the light that's shining in* *it's because i fear that without you* *i might loose my way again* *for the friend who guides me* *and keeps me warm* *throughout the coldest nights* *and when I am going through the hard times * *brings their end in sight* *So for the Angel that's always on top* *pushing me further* *and helping non-stop* *Always making me happy, showing me glee* *As one of my best friends* *your important to me* *So now I'm writing this poem* *and hoping you'll see* *(Patrick-) you remind me of* *the Christmas angel* *that sits a ‘top my tree**
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**THE ANGEL A'TOP MY TREE**

Contributed by crazypoetchick461990 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SpecialOccassion



** I wasn't sure what to get you 4 Christmas* *‘cause I wasn't sure what angels like* *but i thought that you might like this poem* *and I hope that I am right* *because this poem describes an angel* *of the genuine type* *a star lit in the black and endless* *darkness of the night* *a ray of hope through all the pain* *there shining bright* *a sweet and tender whisper* *to let us know that everything's alright* *the one who taught me that no matter what,* *things could be worse* *but once they've hit rock bottom* *they'll get better first* *because through all the shadows round you* *you still see* *the light that's shining in* *it's because i fear that without you* *i might loose my way again* *for the friend who guides me* *and keeps me warm* *throughout the coldest nights* *and when I am going through the hard times * *brings their end in sight* *So for the Angel that's always on top* *pushing me further* *and helping non-stop* *Always making me happy, showing me glee* *As one of my best friends* *your important to me* *So now I'm writing this poem* *and hoping you'll see* *(Patrick-) you remind me of* *the Christmas angel* *that sits a ‘top my tree**




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Re: **THE ANGEL A'TOP MY TREE** (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:21:32 PM AEST
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very beautiful... you do have a very unique style. Again though, stanzas are your friend.

I'd leave the stars in though... they're pretty cool.


Re: **THE ANGEL A'TOP MY TREE** (User Rating: 1 )
by jackwilde on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:07:38 AM AEST
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cool im new to poetry i liked your poem




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