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Array ( [sid] => 84180 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Love Potion 999 [time] => 2005-02-12 22:38:31 [hometext] => It is a crazy notion, me, feeling emotion, must've been the love potion, love potion 999 (cross betwean love and dark poetry) For you know who... [bodytext] => Love Potion 999

I went to go to bed last night
seeking black lace and arsenic dreams
but what to my astounding fright
things weren't as they hellishly seem

my body was missing the ache
I felt something flutter inside
was this feeling delusionally fake
where could my pain go hide?

It bacame worse as time went on
this toastyness in my body,
all of my hate was gone...
no desire to be naughty!

I ran to the mirror to see
my face was no longer pale,
oh god Lucifer could it be
my heart no longer stale?

It is a crazy notion
me, feeling emotion
must've been love potion
love potion 999


He did his voodoo spell
then pricked me with the mix
and into his arms I fell
sneaky Ghosty tricks!

I am huanted by his peircing eyes
burning right through the me
passionate, our midninght cries
his love, plunging so deeply...

Now I utter "Valentine?
Baby, will you be mine?"
even though it's the 999
you make me burn like terpentine!

Feel the pulsing oh so deep
you my heart forever may keep
even when the reeper reeps,
and over us death does creep
not an ounce of my love will seep
from your control.

It is a crazy notion
me, feeling emotion
must've been love potion
love potion 999



666

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Love Potion 999

Contributed by Rxqueen on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:38:31 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Love Potion 999

I went to go to bed last night
seeking black lace and arsenic dreams
but what to my astounding fright
things weren't as they hellishly seem

my body was missing the ache
I felt something flutter inside
was this feeling delusionally fake
where could my pain go hide?

It bacame worse as time went on
this toastyness in my body,
all of my hate was gone...
no desire to be naughty!

I ran to the mirror to see
my face was no longer pale,
oh god Lucifer could it be
my heart no longer stale?

It is a crazy notion
me, feeling emotion
must've been love potion
love potion 999


He did his voodoo spell
then pricked me with the mix
and into his arms I fell
sneaky Ghosty tricks!

I am huanted by his peircing eyes
burning right through the me
passionate, our midninght cries
his love, plunging so deeply...

Now I utter "Valentine?
Baby, will you be mine?"
even though it's the 999
you make me burn like terpentine!

Feel the pulsing oh so deep
you my heart forever may keep
even when the reeper reeps,
and over us death does creep
not an ounce of my love will seep
from your control.

It is a crazy notion
me, feeling emotion
must've been love potion
love potion 999



666

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Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:49:40 PM AEST
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Jocelyn, he's gonna love this one! Great write, quite humorous too!


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:02:35 PM AEST
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Excellent write! :-)


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:46:42 PM AEST
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Wooo hooo! Nice! Things are gettin' warm and cozy around here! Cheers!


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 07:20:58 AM AEST
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Ohh things are geting heavy here LOL. Im sure Ghosty is gonna love this a lot.

Jane x


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:50:42 PM AEST
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Aw, this made me smile, J-baby!
Very sweet and cute,
but of course...
very sexy--
Jocelyn-style.
Who couldn't love ya?

I'm inspired again...

--Ghosty


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 12:36:41 AM AEST
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Aww Jocie so cute. I felt the rhythm and emotion. Great job. ~Sweetness~


Re: Love Potion 999 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:16:54 PM AEST
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Hmmm J this is definately well written, not sure if I see you as the dark type....I may have to rethink my innocent opinion of you!!!!! ;)




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