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Array ( [sid] => 84136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Didn't want to fall in love [time] => 2005-02-12 15:17:30 [hometext] => This poem is for a wonderful man that i met in a chat room now we write e-mail to each other this poem is for him . [bodytext] => I didn't want to fall in love.

I didn't want to feel what love is.

love come when you don't wanted.

it come and take your heart make it
beat again.

Tear come down wanting him to be near.

I didn't want to fall in love nor tear
roll down my cheek .

knowing i will never be with him.

My tear will feel my heart and wash my heart.

Leaving a piece of him to remember him by. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mylady [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Didn't want to fall in love

Contributed by mylady on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:17:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I didn't want to fall in love.

I didn't want to feel what love is.

love come when you don't wanted.

it come and take your heart make it
beat again.

Tear come down wanting him to be near.

I didn't want to fall in love nor tear
roll down my cheek .

knowing i will never be with him.

My tear will feel my heart and wash my heart.

Leaving a piece of him to remember him by.

Copyright © mylady ... [ 2005-02-12 15:17:30]
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Re: Didn't want to fall in love (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:23:27 PM AEST
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I know this all to well. It sucks. YOu just don't want to feel the pain of one-sided love and so you put your heart on a shelf, hoping love won't get to it there but then he walks over and takes it down and steps on it. Sucks doesn't it.

Re: Didn't want to fall in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:30:05 PM AEST
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Nice write. Your english is not very good though.

Just some suggestions to help you improve this piece:

I didn't want to fall in love.
I didn't want to feel what love is.
love came when I didn't want it .

it comes and takes your heart and makes it
beat again.

Tears come down wanting him to be near.

I didn't want to fall in love nor have tears
roll down my cheek .

knowing i will never be with him.

My tears will feel my heart and wash my heart.

Leaving a piece of him to remember

Re: Didn't want to fall in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:31:19 PM AEST
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Too bad we can't control who we fall in love with. good job.

Re: Didn't want to fall in love (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:16:50 AM AEST
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....a sad piece of poetry..

hope things work out for you soon and your heart will be happy
cheers!~

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