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I fear the creaking floor
Steps approaching my door
Alcohol fumes preceding dread
He comes to play in my bed
Fresh blood will run tonight
Chained to the posts I cant even fight
My lips and eyes stitched shut
Festering maggots feast in my cuts
My living hell spread wide
His sickness spewing inside
I am a slave and his child
For him to continuously defile.

By Bleeding_Nightmares
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Enslaved

Contributed by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:22:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Enslaved

I fear the creaking floor
Steps approaching my door
Alcohol fumes preceding dread
He comes to play in my bed
Fresh blood will run tonight
Chained to the posts I cant even fight
My lips and eyes stitched shut
Festering maggots feast in my cuts
My living hell spread wide
His sickness spewing inside
I am a slave and his child
For him to continuously defile.

By Bleeding_Nightmares

Copyright © Bleeding_Nightmares ... [ 2005-02-12 11:22:09]
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Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:35:23 AM AEST
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An extremely powerful and emotional write. I was captured by your words. Very vivid and deep visualizations. Excellent write.

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by Sk8ergrl_911 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 12:40:03 PM AEST
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Wow,
Very very well written, very descriptive, I love it

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 02:49:01 PM AEST
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What a dark write, this was just awesome. I am in lack of words on how to describe this. Well done on this amazing write.

Jane x

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 03:13:39 PM AEST
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The dark sense and power of this poem make it very prominant. I like the way you've written about this in such a way that you'd think it were your own story even though it's just something you've heard of.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by Loche on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 09:13:13 PM AEST
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As otheres have stated before me, I like how you visualized you were in that situation.. Awesome work!

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th February 2005 @ 05:51:00 AM AEST
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You have encaptured the darkness of macabre, pain and hollowness, with a simple scribble of your pen. This is a universal fear, widespread and infectious.
An intriguing muse.

Re: Enslaved (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 10:10:15 PM AEST
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you have immense talent, no reason to limit yourself in topics. =]

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