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Array ( [sid] => 84085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Worth It [time] => 2005-02-12 04:06:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As these emotions that haunt my mind
As the pendulum swings and time passes us by
I keep asking myself where I went wrong
Cause I had a feeling that was so strong

I think that the feelings that I had for you
Were just to complicating and to good to be true
Cause all they did was suffocate me for a while
And left me with a feeling of self denial

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day

Maybe it was because I couldn't take rejection
Maybe it's because I couldn't face my own reflection
You fed off my emotions and used them against me
As I lost every part of the reason I came to be

But I had people who helped me get through
The lies and travesties that you chose to tell
They knew that what you said was far from the truth
So they picked me up and told me that all will end up well

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day

You laid your judgment so quickly
That I found it extremely hard to breathe
You questioned the actions and beliefs of me
When the only intention you had was to deceive

Even with all the lies that I've been told
And when I felt like my integrity was sold
Somehow I found the strength to carry on
It's something I haven't felt for so long

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day [comments] => 3 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Tobe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Not Worth It

Contributed by Tobe on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:06:47 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As these emotions that haunt my mind
As the pendulum swings and time passes us by
I keep asking myself where I went wrong
Cause I had a feeling that was so strong

I think that the feelings that I had for you
Were just to complicating and to good to be true
Cause all they did was suffocate me for a while
And left me with a feeling of self denial

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day

Maybe it was because I couldn't take rejection
Maybe it's because I couldn't face my own reflection
You fed off my emotions and used them against me
As I lost every part of the reason I came to be

But I had people who helped me get through
The lies and travesties that you chose to tell
They knew that what you said was far from the truth
So they picked me up and told me that all will end up well

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day

You laid your judgment so quickly
That I found it extremely hard to breathe
You questioned the actions and beliefs of me
When the only intention you had was to deceive

Even with all the lies that I've been told
And when I felt like my integrity was sold
Somehow I found the strength to carry on
It's something I haven't felt for so long

As soon as I realised that your not worth it
It became clear which lead me to learn this
It came time for me to break away
And look forward to another day

Copyright © Tobe ... [ 2005-02-12 04:06:47]
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Re: Not Worth It (User Rating: 1 )
by in2thetwilightzone2 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 04:51:57 AM AEST
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:D yet again you have put me in a little trance, wonderful, you created image sin my head, and you have to be skilled to get anything in my head lol, no im not that stupid, but still only the best of writer cause this emotion i feel right now, well done and this line:
"Were just too complicating and too good to be true"
thats really good, it made me feel something and it shed light to something in my life, welldone. guru xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxjazzxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: Not Worth It (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleeding_Nightmares on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:40:38 AM AEST
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Long and full of emotions, all are here all are well described, capturing the mind and laying it bare, excellent poem.

Re: Not Worth It (User Rating: 1 )
by liquidsunshine on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 06:01:01 PM AEST
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Whoever this is obviously isn't worth it if they used you like this. I'm glad you're strong enough to realize that and break away from the tendency to dwell on pain. You've also been able to realize how prominant and poignant your emotions are and you have turned them into a great poem, tasteful too. You often find that one's thoughts become bitter after an experience like this, but you've written tactfully and without cruelties or hate. I'm proud of you and I wish you well.

Lots of love and peace be with you,

Chelsea

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